https://shifti.org/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=User_talk%3AClicketyclack%2FThe_Rain_Falls 2026-07-21T22:13:20Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.46.0-alpha https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:Clicketyclack/The_Rain_Falls&diff=14832&oldid=prev 2011-06-29T14:43:24Z

<p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 09:43, 29 June 2011</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l6">Line 6:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 6:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>P.S. No, you didn&#039;t step on my toes. I&#039;m completely unfamiliar with the wiki format. I was attempting to put it where it is supposed to go when I discovered you had already moved it. It was a pleasant surprise for me.</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>P.S. No, you didn&#039;t step on my toes. I&#039;m completely unfamiliar with the wiki format. I was attempting to put it where it is supposed to go when I discovered you had already moved it. It was a pleasant surprise for me.</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Powerful prose indeed.  Difficult but worth the effort.  Rather like a hunk of venison toasted over an open fire in a forest clearing.  Tough but tasty!  --[[User:Alveric|Alveric]] 14:43, 29 June 2011 (UTC)</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff cache key shifti_wiki-shifti_:diff:1.41:old-14829:rev-14832:php=table --> </table>

Alveric https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:Clicketyclack/The_Rain_Falls&diff=14829&oldid=prev 2011-06-29T01:58:27Z

<p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 20:58, 28 June 2011</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l2">Line 2:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 2:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Powerful imagery and great flow - my only complaint is that I&#039;m apparently too tired to follow it in a completely coherent manner. I did manage to make it all the way through and think this shows some promise! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:36, 29 June 2011 (UTC)</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Powerful imagery and great flow - my only complaint is that I&#039;m apparently too tired to follow it in a completely coherent manner. I did manage to make it all the way through and think this shows some promise! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:36, 29 June 2011 (UTC)</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Thank you! There was some worry that it might be hard to follow what's actually happening. I posted it over on FA but didn't get any sort of critique. I will likely continue to tweak it as I feel it's lacking something and the end is not what I want it to be.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">P.S. No, you didn't step on my toes. I'm completely unfamiliar with the wiki format. I was attempting to put it where it is supposed to go when I discovered you had already moved it. It was a pleasant surprise for me.</ins></div></td></tr> </table>

Clicketyclack https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:Clicketyclack/The_Rain_Falls&diff=14828&oldid=prev 2011-06-29T01:36:46Z

<p>okay, wow... powerful imagery</p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 20:36, 28 June 2011</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1">Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Nice to see you post a story! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:28, 29 June 2011 (UTC)</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Nice to see you post a story! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:28, 29 June 2011 (UTC)</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Powerful imagery and great flow - my only complaint is that I'm apparently too tired to follow it in a completely coherent manner. I did manage to make it all the way through and think this shows some promise! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:36, 29 June 2011 (UTC)</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff cache key shifti_wiki-shifti_:diff:1.41:old-14823:rev-14828:php=table --> </table>

ShadowWolf https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:Clicketyclack/The_Rain_Falls&diff=14823&oldid=prev 2011-06-29T01:28:43Z

<p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 20:28, 28 June 2011</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1">Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">#REDIRECT </del>[[User <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">talk</del>:<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Clicketyclack</del>]]</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Nice to see you post a story! -- </ins>[[User:<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf</ins>]] <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">01:28, 29 June 2011 (UTC)</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff cache key shifti_wiki-shifti_:diff:1.41:old-14822:rev-14823:php=table --> </table>

ShadowWolf https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:Clicketyclack/The_Rain_Falls&diff=14822&oldid=prev 2011-06-29T01:28:12Z

<p>moved <a href="/wiki/User_talk:Clicketyclack/The_Rain_Falls" title="User talk:Clicketyclack/The Rain Falls">User talk:Clicketyclack/The Rain Falls</a> to <a href="/wiki/User_talk:Clicketyclack" title="User talk:Clicketyclack">User talk:Clicketyclack</a> over redirect: this shouldn&#039;t have been moved - my bad!</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>#REDIRECT [[User talk:Clicketyclack]]</div>

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