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Robotech Master: /* Chapter 2 */ Dating bobble

2016-02-23T00:37:47Z

Chapter 2: Dating bobble

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	==Chapter 2==		==Chapter 2==

	''April 22, ~~156~~ AL''		''April 22, 158 AL''

	The bluish expanse of the Dry Ocean grew larger beneath the rapidly descending elevator car from Toptown. Totalia was about ten percent larger than Old Earth, but Zharus was much larger than that. It was difficult for Darrek to grasp the sheer size of the supercontinent below them. By itself, the supercontinent of Gondwana had more surface area than all the landmass on his homeworld, and there were two more supercontinents besides.		The bluish expanse of the Dry Ocean grew larger beneath the rapidly descending elevator car from Toptown. Totalia was about ten percent larger than Old Earth, but Zharus was much larger than that. It was difficult for Darrek to grasp the sheer size of the supercontinent below them. By itself, the supercontinent of Gondwana had more surface area than all the landmass on his homeworld, and there were two more supercontinents besides.

Robotech Master: Typo fix

2015-05-18T16:05:51Z

Typo fix

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	Madison nodded. “Anyway, we’ve been careful. After tonight they’ll know Totalia exists, but they won’t know ''where'' it is. Other than the Scouts who actually went out there and us, the only other people who know Totalia’s location are out at Cerberus. We made sure to lock down the Scout records here. They won’t even know which scouts were there unless we tell them.”		Madison nodded. “Anyway, we’ve been careful. After tonight they’ll know Totalia exists, but they won’t know ''where'' it is. Other than the Scouts who actually went out there and us, the only other people who know Totalia’s location are out at Cerberus. We made sure to lock down the Scout records here. They won’t even know which scouts were there unless we tell them.”

	“Oh, yeah, like you and I are about to tell them?” ~~Barbara~~ smirked.		“Oh, yeah, like you and I are about to tell them?” Barbaretta smirked.

	Madison grinned, “Coincidentally, we’re the two scouts that can most easily forget where Totalia is as well.”		Madison grinned, “Coincidentally, we’re the two scouts that can most easily forget where Totalia is as well.”

Robotech Master: typo fix

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	“Sounds great!” Zach said.		“Sounds great!” Zach said.

	~~Henriette~~ mixed the cocktail quickly, adding the powder last and giving the tumbler a little tap. The liquid began to spark and sizzle as if it was lightning in a glass. Zach’s ferrety eyes sparkled as he stared at it, entranced. “Oooooh. I hope it tastes as good as it looks. Shiny!”		Henrietta mixed the cocktail quickly, adding the powder last and giving the tumbler a little tap. The liquid began to spark and sizzle as if it was lightning in a glass. Zach’s ferrety eyes sparkled as he stared at it, entranced. “Oooooh. I hope it tastes as good as it looks. Shiny!”

	Joel picked up the tumbler. “Down the hatch.” Then he took a swig. There was an audible spark. “''Whooo!'' I ''felt'' that one!”		Joel picked up the tumbler. “Down the hatch.” Then he took a swig. There was an audible spark. “''Whooo!'' I ''felt'' that one!”

Robotech Master: typo fix

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	“If you ''catch'' me cheating, I’ll deserve it.”		“If you ''catch'' me cheating, I’ll deserve it.”

	Marcus shook his head. “All right, let’s see if you really do know when to hold ‘em. Loser takes the first maintenance shift after jump		Marcus shook his head. “All right, let’s see if you really do know when to hold ‘em. Loser takes the first maintenance shift after we enter jump."

	“You are ''so'' on.”		“You are ''so'' on.”

Robotech Master: Linking the nextie!

2015-05-16T16:51:18Z

Linking the nextie!

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	\|next=Robotech Master/Parallels Clementine\|Parallels, Part Two: Clementine]]}}		\|next=[[User:Robotech Master/Parallels Clementine\|Parallels, Part Two: Clementine]]}}

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Robotech Master: /* Chapter 7 */ More plot bunnies.

2015-05-11T18:26:18Z

Chapter 7: More plot bunnies.

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	“So, that’s the last thing you needed? You’re all ready to send off the report?” Madison asked.		“So, that’s the last thing you needed? You’re all ready to send off the report?” Madison asked.

	Darrek nodded. “If we’re going to make the torp’s launch deadline, it’ll have to be. I’ve already assembled the rest of our report. I’ll go over it one more time to make sure everything’s there, then pfffft! Off it goes.”		Darrek nodded. “If we’re going to make the torp’s launch deadline, it’ll have to be. I’ve already assembled the rest of our final report. I’ll go over it one more time to make sure everything’s there, then pfffft! Off it goes. It’ll be there in a couple of weeks to let ‘em know we’re ''finally'' on our way.”

	~~“Just in time to meet the ''Clementine'' there.”~~ Madison sighed. “I wish ''I'' were there.”		Madison sighed. “I wish ''I'' were there.”

	Teenette grinned. “Surely you wouldn’t want to deprive ''us'' of the pleasure of your company…”		Teenette grinned. “Surely you wouldn’t want to deprive ''us'' of the pleasure of your company…”

Robotech Master: /* Chapter 6 */ More plot stuff.

2015-05-11T18:23:10Z

Chapter 6: More plot stuff.

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	Zane shrugged and tugged at his suit jacket. “You’ve met some of them already, or met their representatives. The rest probably suspect some or most of it; The Ambassador offices have more leaks than an onion farm. Still, this will be official confirmation, and Totalia’s introduction on the extraplanetary stage.”		Zane shrugged and tugged at his suit jacket. “You’ve met some of them already, or met their representatives. The rest probably suspect some or most of it; The Ambassador offices have more leaks than an onion farm. Still, this will be official confirmation, and Totalia’s introduction on the extraplanetary stage.”

	“I just hope this isn’t too much; that I’m not overstepping our bounds,” Darrek ~~noted, gripping~~ Arca’s hand for support.		“I just hope this isn’t too much; that I’m not overstepping our bounds.” Darrek gripped Arca’s hand for support.

	~~“We’ve been careful~~. After ~~tonight they’ll know Totalia exists~~, ~~but~~ they ~~won’t know~~ ''~~where~~'' ~~it is. Other than the Scouts who actually went out there and us~~, ~~the only other people~~ who ~~know Totalia’s location are out at Cerberus. We made sure to lock down~~ the ~~Scout records here. They won’t even know which scouts were there unless we tell them,~~” ~~Madison said.~~		Teenette shook her head. “We have to get this done. After that report we got from the ''Clementine'' last month, it’s more important than ever that we line up alliances wherever possible. If they could hurt the ''Kybalion'' that badly, who knows what else they might do in the meantime?”

	~~“Like~~ you and I are about to tell them?” Barbara ~~noted~~.		Madison nodded. “Anyway, we’ve been careful. After tonight they’ll know Totalia exists, but they won’t know ''where'' it is. Other than the Scouts who actually went out there and us, the only other people who know Totalia’s location are out at Cerberus. We made sure to lock down the Scout records here. They won’t even know which scouts were there unless we tell them.”

			“Oh, yeah, like you and I are about to tell them?” Barbara smirked.

	Madison grinned, “Coincidentally, we’re the two scouts that can most easily forget where Totalia is as well.”		Madison grinned, “Coincidentally, we’re the two scouts that can most easily forget where Totalia is as well.”

Robotech Master: /* Chapter 5 */ Plot tweak

2015-05-11T18:16:09Z

Chapter 5: Plot tweak

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	Darrek dropped some ''mu'' into the coin slot, including an extra tithe to cover insurance since he wasn’t using a charge account, and the stand dispensed his skimmer—a fairly large bike with angled grips and anti-gravity pontoons along the sides. He straddled it and examined the instrument panel. Autopilot was easy enough to switch off. And there was also something marked “Transponder Beacon.” Darrek didn’t like the sound of that—the whole purpose of this trip was to get away ''without'' being tracked—so he turned that one off, too.		Darrek dropped some ''mu'' into the coin slot, including an extra tithe to cover insurance since he wasn’t using a charge account, and the stand dispensed his skimmer—a fairly large bike with angled grips and anti-gravity pontoons along the sides. He straddled it and examined the instrument panel. Autopilot was easy enough to switch off. And there was also something marked “Transponder Beacon.” Darrek didn’t like the sound of that—the whole purpose of this trip was to get away ''without'' being tracked—so he turned that one off, too.

	Thus prepared, Darrek started the bike and headed for the gateway out of town. There were several sites just outside of Nextus he wanted to get a better look at. The so-called “Recreation Park,” named with the literal-mindedness that was such a part of the city-state’s character, looked like a nice place for a picnic lunch after visiting the Terraforming Museum. The museum was built ''inside'' of one of the Neumonformers that had done the job before the original colonists landed—an irresistible must-see for him, but he wanted some time on his own for once.		Thus prepared, Darrek started the bike and headed for the gateway out of town. There were several sites just outside of Nextus he wanted to get a better look at. The so-called “Recreation Park,” named with the literal-mindedness that was such a part of the city-state’s character, looked like a nice place for a picnic lunch after visiting the Terraforming Museum. The museum was built ''inside'' of one of the Neumonformers that had done the job before the original colonists landed—an irresistible must-see for him, but he wanted some time on his own for once. They would be sending their first report back to Totalia in a few days, covering everything that had happened since they’d arrived, and he wanted just a little something more to put in it.

	By the time he got to the city gate, he’d figured out how to activate the hardlight environmental bubble, which was good—it was a little too warm outside to be comfortable right now.		By the time he got to the city gate, he’d figured out how to activate the hardlight environmental bubble, which was good—it was a little too warm outside to be comfortable right now.

Robotech Master: Part One of the fleet preparation story!

2015-04-22T04:33:07Z

Part One of the fleet preparation story!

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