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Robotech Master: /* Authors' Notes */ duh...

2016-02-03T17:46:09Z

Authors' Notes: duh...

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	Also, the scene with Quinoa calling the Towers to confirm that she’s been kicked out is an extension of the other new stuff we added in preceding chapters—a chance to show Quinoa reacting to Paulie’s death, and to get in some more information about her early life.		Also, the scene with Quinoa calling the Towers to confirm that she’s been kicked out is an extension of the other new stuff we added in preceding chapters—a chance to show Quinoa reacting to Paulie’s death, and to get in some more information about her early life.

	Another relatively major change has to do with the dating. We moved Kaylee’s flashback from December 8, 121 AL forward to ~~February~~ 8, 121 AL, on account of Kaylee’s episode-long flashback in #13 starting out in April, 121.		Another relatively major change has to do with the dating. We moved Kaylee’s flashback from December 8, 121 AL forward to March 8, 121 AL, on account of Kaylee’s episode-long flashback in #13 starting out in April, 121. (Well, actually first I moved it to February, then remembered, ''duh'', there’s no February on Zharus.)

	This is only the first of many dating changes that are going to have to be made as the Director’s Cut progresses—while we were preparing this episode for posting, I did a skim-read-ahead so I could precisely lock down the dating of various events in a cheat sheet so as to be sure where they fell for the sake of reference in a side story Jon and I are writing. (”DISSOLVE TO,” if you’re reading this at some nebulous point in the future when ''that'' is finished and posted.)		This is only the first of many dating changes that are going to have to be made as the Director’s Cut progresses—while we were preparing this episode for posting, I did a skim-read-ahead so I could precisely lock down the dating of various events in a cheat sheet so as to be sure where they fell for the sake of reference in a side story Jon and I are writing. (”DISSOLVE TO,” if you’re reading this at some nebulous point in the future when ''that'' is finished and posted.)

Robotech Master: /* Integration / facepalm* Duh, duh, duh, Zharus doesn't HAVE February...

2016-02-03T09:08:18Z

Integration: *facepalm* Duh, duh, duh, Zharus doesn't HAVE February...

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	DATE: ~~February~~ 8, 121 AL, 1034 hrs.<br>		DATE: March 8, 121 AL, 1034 hrs.<br>
	UNIT: K3-LNX(f)-001<br>		UNIT: K3-LNX(f)-001<br>
	PURPOSE: Fuser Armor Mode Transition, Static Testing.<br>		PURPOSE: Fuser Armor Mode Transition, Static Testing.<br>

Robotech Master: /* Authors' Notes */ Slight tweak to naming for consistency.

2016-01-30T17:03:35Z

Authors' Notes: Slight tweak to naming for consistency.

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	Quinoa is first revealed as kind of a complicated character in this chapter. Even before the additions to go into her backstory, there was the whole section where she talked about her little habit of buying cross-RIDEs for people who wanted them, in exchange for spending the night with her. That’s going to get her into trouble someday in Cape Nord. Also, we had Quinoa, of all people, be the one to talk some sense into Zane after he blew his own foot off with Rhianna. When you get to know her, there ''is'' more to her beneath that spoiled-rich-girl exterior—but as the cross-RIDE thing shows, it’s still a pretty brazen exterior.		Quinoa is first revealed as kind of a complicated character in this chapter. Even before the additions to go into her backstory, there was the whole section where she talked about her little habit of buying cross-RIDEs for people who wanted them, in exchange for spending the night with her. That’s going to get her into trouble someday in Cape Nord. Also, we had Quinoa, of all people, be the one to talk some sense into Zane after he blew his own foot off with Rhianna. When you get to know her, there ''is'' more to her beneath that spoiled-rich-girl exterior—but as the cross-RIDE thing shows, it’s still a pretty brazen exterior.

	'''~~Jon~~:''' GoogleDocs really changes the way cooperative writing works. I’ve done cooperative work with friends over the years. Mostly that took on just sending email back and forth, taking turns writing section by section. The old Round Robin style. But with Gdocs you can watch the text flow on a live basis. And as I watched R_M write Zane’s little speech, I was actually getting a little angry. But the more I thought about it, the more I considered it a watershed characterization for Zane. Something for him to grow out of.		'''JonBuck:''' GoogleDocs really changes the way cooperative writing works. I’ve done cooperative work with friends over the years. Mostly that took on just sending email back and forth, taking turns writing section by section. The old Round Robin style. But with Gdocs you can watch the text flow on a live basis. And as I watched R_M write Zane’s little speech, I was actually getting a little angry. But the more I thought about it, the more I considered it a watershed characterization for Zane. Something for him to grow out of.

	At this point in the original Fritz was still a disaffected jokester rather than the leader of all Integrates. He really didn’t start getting truly dangerous as a character until a few parts later.		At this point in the original Fritz was still a disaffected jokester rather than the leader of all Integrates. He really didn’t start getting truly dangerous as a character until a few parts later.

Robotech Master: Implementing the Director's Cut!

2016-01-22T21:57:40Z

Implementing the Director's Cut!

Show changes

Robotech Master: new episode name

2012-08-12T00:44:52Z

new episode name

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JonBuck at 05:59, 9 August 2012

2012-08-09T05:59:12Z

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	“If it’s there it’ll get put in the right place. Anything fun this defrag?” asked Rhianna, Fusing up with the lynx.		“If it’s there it’ll get put in the right place. Anything fun this defrag?” asked Rhianna, Fusing up with the lynx.

	:''Hmm. Well, how about this?'': Kaylee thought, starting the memory replay. :''Remember how Anny said she was my ''second ''test rider? The first was technically accidental.'':		'':Hmm. Well, how about this?:'' Kaylee thought, starting the memory replay. :''Remember how Anny said she was my ''second ''test rider? The first was technically accidental.'':

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	“What the fu—!” the young man’s shout was cut off as Kaylee partly liquefied around him and it became a ''young woman’s'' shout. Fortunately for him—''her''—the Fuser nannies worked perfectly, just as Dr. Rosenthal had designed them.		“What the fu—!” the young man’s shout was cut off as Kaylee partly liquefied around him and it became a ''young woman’s'' shout. Fortunately for him—''her''—the Fuser nannies worked perfectly, just as Dr. Rosenthal had designed them.

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	“World’s first crossrider,” Kaylee said dryly. “First real ‘RIDEr’, for that matter. The investigation found that it was mainly a problem with the fetters and a telemetry glitch, so they reconfigured them again so I could speak freely. What’s-her-name got extra pay and agreed not to sue, even though it was partly her fault. They gave her a new identity out of whole cloth, I think. The project was still Top Secret, so they couldn’t do anything else.”		“World’s first crossrider,” Kaylee said dryly. “First real ‘RIDEr’, for that matter. The investigation found that it was mainly a problem with the fetters and a telemetry glitch, so they reconfigured them again so I could speak freely. What’s-her-name got extra pay and agreed not to sue, even though it was partly her fault. They gave her a new identity out of whole cloth, I think. The project was still Top Secret, so they couldn’t do anything else.”

Robotech Master: New story segment! Conflict conflict CONFLICT!

2012-08-09T01:27:00Z

New story segment! Conflict conflict CONFLICT!