User:Robotech Master/Aloha Stonegates - Revision history

Robotech Master: With the timeline revisions, this story happens before the Young Guns is even a thing. So out that part goes.

2018-08-10T02:10:57Z

With the timeline revisions, this story happens before the Young Guns is even a thing. So out that part goes.

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	{{dropcap\|A}}rlene spotted a familiar humanoid lynx form chatting with Charlene, and went over to speak to her. “Oh, Rhianna, there you—” She paused as the lynx turned to face her, and she realized it wasn't Kaylee after all. The fur pattern was different~~, and she was wearing a half-hollow tin star Marshals badge on her torso modesty plate~~.		{{dropcap\|A}}rlene spotted a familiar humanoid lynx form chatting with Charlene, and went over to speak to her. “Oh, Rhianna, there you—” She paused as the lynx turned to face her, and she realized it wasn't Kaylee after all. The fur pattern was different.

	“Evening,” the lynx said. “I'm Kandace, and my partner's Jenni. You must be Rhianna's mother. Nice to meet you. If you're looking for my sister and your daughter, I think they're over there on the beach.”		“Evening,” the lynx said. “I'm Kandace, and my partner's Jenni. You must be Rhianna's mother. Nice to meet you. If you're looking for my sister and your daughter, I think they're over there on the beach.”
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	“Yeah.” Kandace's head-helmet retracted revealing a young girl's face, which bore the same ears-and-nose lynx tags as Rhianna along with blonde hair, blue eyes, and a sprinkling of freckles. She smiled amiably at Arlene. “It's nice to meet you, Mrs. Gates. I'm glad we were in the neighborhood.”		“Yeah.” Kandace's head-helmet retracted revealing a young girl's face, which bore the same ears-and-nose lynx tags as Rhianna along with blonde hair, blue eyes, and a sprinkling of freckles. She smiled amiably at Arlene. “It's nice to meet you, Mrs. Gates. I'm glad we were in the neighborhood.”

	“So am I.” ~~Arlene took in the badge on Kandace's chest~~. ~~“Maybe this is~~ a ~~silly question~~, ~~but aren't~~ you ~~a little young to be a Marshal~~?”		“So am I.” She raised an eyebrow. “So, you…spent a few years dead, you say?”

	~~Kandace~~ slid ~~her head~~ back into place. ~~“We're part of the Marshals' new 'Young Guns' youth program. Sort of a part~~-~~time internship thing~~, ~~like scouting but with more teeth~~.”		“Not exactly by choice,” Kandace’s helmet slid back into place. “Got some heavy Q-dust contamination when I escaped to Alpha Camp, and they didn’t have the means to revive me for some little while.”

	~~“Now that everyone’s school’s over, we’re heading out to our base for our initial training next week,” Jenni said proudly~~. ~~“I’m really looking forward to working together with Jeanette, Tammy, Katie, and the others~~. ~~We’re gonna kick ''ass.''~~”		Arlene winced. “Ouch.”

	Kandace chuckled. ~~“We certainly will~~. ~~Anyway~~, it looks like they’re just about ready to serve ~~the food~~, and Jenni here’s a growing girl.”		“But she got better!” Jenni put in.

			“And then I met Jenni, here, and we sort of hit it off.” Kandace chuckled. “Jenni’s from these parts. I’m looking after her while her family’s away. It’s kind of a full-time job.”

			“Not that it stops her from working a couple of ''other'' jobs, to pay the rent,” Jenni added.

			“I’m glad to hear you’re getting by.”

			Kandace glanced toward the tables where the food was being set out. “Anyway, it looks like they’re just about ready to serve dinner, and Jenni here’s a growing girl.”

	“We have an arrangement going,” Jenni said. “''I'' eat as much as I want, and ''she'' doesn’t gain any weight.”		“We have an arrangement going,” Jenni said. “''I'' eat as much as I want, and ''she'' doesn’t gain any weight.”

Robotech Master at 04:44, 9 August 2018

2018-08-09T04:44:06Z

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	by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]		by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]

			{{author note\|This story can be downloaded in PDF, EPUB, Mobi (Kindle), ODF, and RTF format from [http://www.eyrie.org/~robotech/freeriders/ this website].}}<br>

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Robotech Master at 04:42, 9 August 2018

2018-08-09T04:42:23Z

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	{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”		{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”

Robotech Master: Typo fixes and continuity tweak

2018-08-09T03:53:06Z

Typo fixes and continuity tweak

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	{{dropcap\|A}}rlene spotted a familiar humanoid lynx form chatting with Charlene, and went over to speak to her. “Oh, Rhianna, there you—” She paused as the lynx turned to face her, and she realized it wasn't Kaylee after all. The fur pattern was different, and she was wearing a ~~copper~~ star Marshals badge on her torso modesty plate.		{{dropcap\|A}}rlene spotted a familiar humanoid lynx form chatting with Charlene, and went over to speak to her. “Oh, Rhianna, there you—” She paused as the lynx turned to face her, and she realized it wasn't Kaylee after all. The fur pattern was different, and she was wearing a half-hollow tin star Marshals badge on her torso modesty plate.

	“Evening,” the lynx said. “I'm Kandace, and my partner's Jenni. You must be Rhianna's mother. Nice to meet you. If you're looking for my sister and your daughter, I think they're over there on the beach.”		“Evening,” the lynx said. “I'm Kandace, and my partner's Jenni. You must be Rhianna's mother. Nice to meet you. If you're looking for my sister and your daughter, I think they're over there on the beach.”
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	Kandace slid her head back into place. “We're part of the Marshals' new 'Young Guns' youth program. Sort of a part-time internship thing, like scouting but with more teeth.”		Kandace slid her head back into place. “We're part of the Marshals' new 'Young Guns' youth program. Sort of a part-time internship thing, like scouting but with more teeth.”

	~~“But~~ we’re ~~not play-pretend Marshals, either~~,” Jenni said proudly. ~~“We’ve already busted several criminals~~, ~~including one major operation~~. We kick ''ass.''”		“Now that everyone’s school’s over, we’re heading out to our base for our initial training next week,” Jenni said proudly. “I’m really looking forward to working together with Jeanette, Tammy, Katie, and the others. We’re gonna kick ''ass.''”

	Kandace chuckled. “We certainly do. Anyway, it looks like they’re just about ready to serve the food, and Jenni here’s a growing girl.”		Kandace chuckled. “We certainly will. Anyway, it looks like they’re just about ready to serve the food, and Jenni here’s a growing girl.”

	“We have an arrangement going,” Jenni said. “''I'' eat as much as I want, and ''she'' doesn’t gain any weight.”		“We have an arrangement going,” Jenni said. “''I'' eat as much as I want, and ''she'' doesn’t gain any weight.”
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	Gary chuckled and waved Sparky in closer. The EIDE moved in warily. “At least it's not as bad as when Astranikki met him.”		Gary chuckled and waved Sparky in closer. The EIDE moved in warily. “At least it's not as bad as when Astranikki met him.”

	“That's ~~debateable~~,” Ryan countered as Sparky was surrounded by the pride of Geeks.		“That's debatable,” Ryan countered as Sparky was surrounded by the pride of Geeks.

	Sparky tolerated their examinations for a few minutes, showing off his skimmer-cycle mode and fusing with Gary when requested. But finally the fused pair pointed to the tables. “I'm not going anywhere ladies, but the food is getting cold and they are waiting for us.”		Sparky tolerated their examinations for a few minutes, showing off his skimmer-cycle mode and fusing with Gary when requested. But finally the fused pair pointed to the tables. “I'm not going anywhere ladies, but the food is getting cold and they are waiting for us.”

Robotech Master: Re-dat

2016-12-12T06:07:12Z

Re-dat

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	by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]		by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]

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	{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”		{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”

Robotech Master: Whoops, posted by copying and pasting credits from another story, forgot to add the third author!

2013-04-30T12:06:45Z

Whoops, posted by copying and pasting credits from another story, forgot to add the third author!

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	=Aloha, Stonegates!=		=Aloha, Stonegates!=

	by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]] ~~and~~ [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]]		by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]

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Robotech Master at 06:13, 30 April 2013

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	As she waded, a snatch of song drifted down from someone’s audio player up the beach.		As she waded, a snatch of song drifted down from someone’s audio player up the beach.

	''Wouldn't it be nice if we were older''		''Wouldn't it be nice if we were older''<br>
	''Then we wouldn't have to wait so long''		''Then we wouldn't have to wait so long''<br>
	''And wouldn't it be nice to live together''		''And wouldn't it be nice to live together''<br>
	''In the kind of world where we belong''		''In the kind of world where we belong''

	The song was in multi-part harmony, hauntingly familiar, something dimly-remembered from fifty years ago. Socah's neural lace searched her hypothalamus for the associations.		The song was in multi-part harmony, hauntingly familiar, something dimly-remembered from fifty years ago. Socah's neural lace searched her hypothalamus for the associations.

	''You know it's going to make it that much better''		''You know it's going to make it that much better''<br>
	''When we could say goodnight and stay together''		''When we could say goodnight and stay together''

Robotech Master at 06:12, 30 April 2013

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	''Wouldn't it be nice if we were older''		''Wouldn't it be nice if we were older''

	''Then we wouldn't have to wait so long''		''Then we wouldn't have to wait so long''

	''And wouldn't it be nice to live together''		''And wouldn't it be nice to live together''

	''In the kind of world where we belong''		''In the kind of world where we belong''

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	''You know it's going to make it that much better''		''You know it's going to make it that much better''

	''When we could say goodnight and stay together''		''When we could say goodnight and stay together''

Robotech Master at 06:06, 30 April 2013

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Robotech Master: The Stonegate family takes a trip!

2013-04-30T06:05:09Z

The Stonegate family takes a trip!

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	by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]		by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]

			{{author note\|This story can be downloaded in PDF, EPUB, Mobi (Kindle), ODF, and RTF format from [http://www.eyrie.org/~robotech/freeriders/ this website].}}<br>

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	by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]		by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]

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	{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”		{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”

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	by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]		by [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]], [[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech_Master]], and [[User:Jetfire\|Jetfire]]

	{{separator\|k\|~~June 28~~, 157 AL}}		{{separator\|k\|March 17, 157 AL}}

	{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”		{{dropcap\|A}}fter Kaylee dropped her off, Rhianna rang the doorbell promptly at 22:00, and smiled as she heard the thump-thump-thump of footsteps coming up the hall, followed by the door unlatching. “Come in, come in!” her mother Arlene said, beckoning her over the threshold. “Oh, you brought something? You didn’t have to do that…”