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Robotech Master: /* Authors' Notes */ Slight tweak to naming for consistency.

2016-01-30T17:04:07Z

Authors' Notes: Slight tweak to naming for consistency.

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	It’s been awhile since we were able to get these Director’s Cuts out regularly, but you’ll probably see at least a few more from us over the next little while. The trilogy of new stories we’ve just finished writing the latter two stories in (which we’ll be posting very soon) appears set to intersect with and potentially affect part of the course of the main story, which is something kind of new for us. So for us to be able to write more about those particular characters, we have to catch up so we can weave them into the Director’s Cut when we revisit the story at that point. At least it gives us more incentive to put our noses back to the grindstone!		It’s been awhile since we were able to get these Director’s Cuts out regularly, but you’ll probably see at least a few more from us over the next little while. The trilogy of new stories we’ve just finished writing the latter two stories in (which we’ll be posting very soon) appears set to intersect with and potentially affect part of the course of the main story, which is something kind of new for us. So for us to be able to write more about those particular characters, we have to catch up so we can weave them into the Director’s Cut when we revisit the story at that point. At least it gives us more incentive to put our noses back to the grindstone!

	'''~~Jon~~:''' When I give a character a name, they start asking for a backstory. They’re persistent like that and almost as bad as the background characters in ''Star Wars'', all of whom somehow end up getting names and histories. So if I can avoid naming a minor character, they won’t become a [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PlotTumor Plot Tumor] like they potentially could. So, Rhi’s other apprentices don’t get names because I know how my writer’s brain works.		'''JonBuck:''' When I give a character a name, they start asking for a backstory. They’re persistent like that and almost as bad as the background characters in ''Star Wars'', all of whom somehow end up getting names and histories. So if I can avoid naming a minor character, they won’t become a [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PlotTumor Plot Tumor] like they potentially could. So, Rhi’s other apprentices don’t get names because I know how my writer’s brain works.

	Regarding Katie, Kaylee, and the “daughter” line, the major commentary there will have to wait until we get to the part where that scene happens. Which is quite a ways away at this point. Suffice to say that family is and will remain a huge theme in FreeRIDErs. Maybe because I’m at the point in life where I’ve pined for one myself. Ah well.		Regarding Katie, Kaylee, and the “daughter” line, the major commentary there will have to wait until we get to the part where that scene happens. Which is quite a ways away at this point. Suffice to say that family is and will remain a huge theme in FreeRIDErs. Maybe because I’m at the point in life where I’ve pined for one myself. Ah well.

Robotech Master: /* Part 6: All Aboard! */ fixing a glitch

2016-01-26T16:29:26Z

Part 6: All Aboard!: fixing a glitch

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	“Thank you,” Relena said. “I’ll try to be worthy of that.”		“Thank you,” Relena said. “I’ll try to be worthy of that.”

	“Hmph,” Katie said. “Shouldn’t be a question of ''you'' being worthy of ''me''. Young thing like you deserves someone shiny and new, not a ~~She seems to get significantly less crusty in subsequent episodes, doesn't she?Influence from Relena, I think.~~crusty old reprrrobate like me. You should just wipe me and start over.”		“Hmph,” Katie said. “Shouldn’t be a question of ''you'' being worthy of ''me''. Young thing like you deserves someone shiny and new, not a crusty old reprrrobate like me. You should just wipe me and start over.”

	“I’d never!” Relena insisted, wide-eyed. “I’d just as soon wipe my own grandmother. You’ve got a lifetime of valuable experience, and Mom always said ''I'' don’t have enough sense to come in out of the rain—and around here they ''schedule'' the rain a year in advance. If you take care of me, I’ll do my best to take care of you.” She put her arms around Katie’s neck and gave the half-metal lynx a hug. Katie looked uncertain for a moment, then gave Relena’s cheek a lick with a hardlight tongue that was only about half there.		“I’d never!” Relena insisted, wide-eyed. “I’d just as soon wipe my own grandmother. You’ve got a lifetime of valuable experience, and Mom always said ''I'' don’t have enough sense to come in out of the rain—and around here they ''schedule'' the rain a year in advance. If you take care of me, I’ll do my best to take care of you.” She put her arms around Katie’s neck and gave the half-metal lynx a hug. Katie looked uncertain for a moment, then gave Relena’s cheek a lick with a hardlight tongue that was only about half there.

Robotech Master: Implementing the Director's Cut!

2016-01-25T21:40:52Z

Implementing the Director's Cut!

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JonBuck at 17:45, 18 August 2012

2012-08-18T17:45:27Z

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Robotech Master: /* Integration */

2012-08-12T23:54:58Z

Integration

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Robotech Master: /* Integration */

2012-08-12T23:52:25Z

Integration

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JonBuck at 05:45, 12 August 2012

2012-08-12T05:45:37Z

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Robotech Master: Fixing a darned period. stupid typos.

2012-08-12T01:17:53Z

Fixing a darned period. stupid typos.

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	{{dropcap\|E}}very Apprentice had their own personal project, Lillibet’s was more expensive than the others, but Rhianna did her best not to give the girl preferential treatment, or even the ''appearance ''of doing so. As the raccoon RIDE’s boot-up was proving more complex than Katie’s, she decided to check on the others to see how they were doing.		{{dropcap\|E}}very Apprentice had their own personal project. Lillibet’s was more expensive than the others, but Rhianna did her best not to give the girl preferential treatment, or even the ''appearance ''of doing so. As the raccoon RIDE’s boot-up was proving more complex than Katie’s, she decided to check on the others to see how they were doing.

	The other two who already owned RIDEs were busy upgrading them, simple enough. Paul, the teenager who was the object of Lillibet’s affections and didn’t own a RIDE, had taken to finishing up the towskim as his project. Though it had taken everyone to change the Deuce’s structure, one person could easily get most everything else installed and tested.		The other two who already owned RIDEs were busy upgrading them, simple enough. Paul, the teenager who was the object of Lillibet’s affections and didn’t own a RIDE, had taken to finishing up the towskim as his project. Though it had taken everyone to change the Deuce’s structure, one person could easily get most everything else installed and tested.

Robotech Master: separating a paragraph

2012-08-12T01:16:19Z

separating a paragraph

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	As they reached the zenith of their arc, and gravity receded, Zane grinned. “Ladies and…ladies, your attention please. If I might direct your attention to the viewports, the show is about to begin.”		As they reached the zenith of their arc, and gravity receded, Zane grinned. “Ladies and…ladies, your attention please. If I might direct your attention to the viewports, the show is about to begin.”

	Sophie’s ears perked up. “Show? What do you—ooooh!” Through the viewport, the starscape began to slide to one side, as the suborbital slowly began to rotate to starboard. Quinoa unfastened her straps and pushed off from her chair, floating up next to the huge viewport in the ceiling. “You know, it’s funny,” she reflected aloud. “I’d swear this size of bird was supposed to have artificial gravity.”		Sophie’s ears perked up. “Show? What do you—ooooh!” Through the viewport, the starscape began to slide to one side, as the suborbital slowly began to rotate to starboard.

			Quinoa unfastened her straps and pushed off from her chair, floating up next to the huge viewport in the ceiling. “You know, it’s funny,” she reflected aloud. “I’d swear this size of bird was supposed to have artificial gravity.”

	“Shhhh!” Zane hissed theatrically, and Quinoa giggled. Myla just shook her head in amusement.		“Shhhh!” Zane hissed theatrically, and Quinoa giggled. Myla just shook her head in amusement.

Robotech Master: dropcap fix

2012-08-12T01:14:48Z

dropcap fix

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	{{dropcap\|“C}an’t believe he tried to give us a frigging ''Starmaster'',” Kaylee said as the Fused duo looked through suborbital sales listings. “Qixi’s sub was only fifty meters!”		{{dropcap\|“C}}an’t believe he tried to give us a frigging ''Starmaster'',” Kaylee said as the Fused duo looked through suborbital sales listings. “Qixi’s sub was only fifty meters!”

	'':Yep,:'' Rhianna replied. '':But let’s just enjoy ourselves. I’m not really finding any in the used listings that works for us on our budget. They’re either way too big, or family suborbitals meant for weekend trips to Laurasia.:'' Frowning, she reluctantly brought up the listings for ''new'' subs, but before she could really get started a reminder went off. Lillibet was almost ready for her presentation. The duo de-Fused and left her home above the original Garage.		'':Yep,:'' Rhianna replied. '':But let’s just enjoy ourselves. I’m not really finding any in the used listings that works for us on our budget. They’re either way too big, or family suborbitals meant for weekend trips to Laurasia.:'' Frowning, she reluctantly brought up the listings for ''new'' subs, but before she could really get started a reminder went off. Lillibet was almost ready for her presentation. The duo de-Fused and left her home above the original Garage.