User:Michael Bard/Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream - Revision history

ShadowWolf: add {{universe}}

2009-02-14T20:51:18Z

add {{universe}}

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	{{title\|name=Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream\|author=Michael Bard}}		{{title\|name=Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream\|author=Michael Bard}}
	[[Category:Anthropomorphic]][[Category:Cervine]][[Category:Mythical]]		[[Category:Anthropomorphic]][[Category:Cervine]][[Category:Mythical]]
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	She stood there, terrified. Alone. Dressed. Her hand on the door handle. Unable to move.		She stood there, terrified. Alone. Dressed. Her hand on the door handle. Unable to move.

Michael Bard at 21:45, 13 March 2008

2008-03-13T21:45:45Z

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	''«Ignore him! Go for the girl. Ask her, beg! '''I dont want to die!'''»''		''«Ignore him! Go for the girl. Ask her, beg! '''I dont want to die!'''»''

	She staggered towards the girl, sunlight glistening off her body, off her horn, off the gold or the bridle. In the distance, she could see ''Master'' bounding across the field, holding something in each of his hands. Tripping, she fell in front of the girl, her breath being knocked out of her in a lilac-smelling whoosh the whispered across the girl who was staring.		She staggered towards the girl, sunlight glistening off her body, off her horn, off the gold of the bridle. In the distance, she could see ''Master'' bounding across the field, holding something in each of his hands. Tripping, she fell in front of the girl, her breath being knocked out of her in a lilac-smelling whoosh the whispered across the girl who was staring.

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	The sounds of the children were distant now, the sounds of their happiness odd and tinny, as though they were in a different world. Wind was beginning to howl, swirling around them, keeping out the growing flock of birds that swept round and round. The girls long hair had been neatly braided, but now it blew loose, whipping around her body. Pages in her book flipped back and forth with sharp snapping sounds, like erudite stilettos.		The sounds of the children were distant now, the sounds of their happiness odd and tinny, as though they were in a different world. Wind was beginning to howl, swirling around them, keeping out the growing flock of birds that swept round and round. The girls long hair had been neatly braided, but now it blew loose, whipping around her body. Pages in her book flipped back and forth with sharp snapping sounds, like erudite stilettos.

	The Shiny is mine!Pleasehelp me the unicorn whispered, her voice clearly audible even over the howl of the wind.		The Shiny is mine!

			Pleasehelp me the unicorn whispered, her voice clearly audible even over the howl of the wind.

	The girl pushed herself back, eyes wide with terror.		The girl pushed herself back, eyes wide with terror.

Michael Bard: Removed all the horizontal lines that got in somehow

2008-03-13T21:16:50Z

Removed all the horizontal lines that got in somehow

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Michael Bard: Category fixes

2008-03-12T23:58:57Z

Category fixes

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	[[Category:Story]] {{DEFAULTSORT:Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream}}		[[Category:Story]] {{DEFAULTSORT:Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream}}
	{{title\|name=Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream\|author=Michael Bard}}		{{title\|name=Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream\|author=Michael Bard}}
			[[Category:Anthropomorphic]][[Category:Cervine]][[Category:Mythical]]

	She stood there, terrified. Alone. Dressed. Her hand on the door handle. Unable to move.		She stood there, terrified. Alone. Dressed. Her hand on the door handle. Unable to move.

Bryan: One of the font color values wasn't identical to the others. Changing it to match. Does this fix it?

2008-03-08T19:00:07Z

One of the font color values wasn't identical to the others. Changing it to match. Does this fix it?

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	She shivered, thinking of him as she sat in the headless lounge, head on for anonymity, sipping cool water through a long purple straw shed had hidden in the folds of her dress.		She shivered, thinking of him as she sat in the headless lounge, head on for anonymity, sipping cool water through a long purple straw shed had hidden in the folds of her dress.

	Itd been a long day. '''He''' was hot and sweaty, soaked in sweat. But <font color="#~~FFFF00~~">'''she'''</font> was in charge, and she was having ''far'' too much fun to even think about going back! The original plan had been for '''him''' to spend the morning as the unicorn. Then go up, shower, and come back in his horse fursuit for some of the technical categories.		Itd been a long day. '''He''' was hot and sweaty, soaked in sweat. But <font color="#CC9900">'''she'''</font> was in charge, and she was having ''far'' too much fun to even think about going back! The original plan had been for '''him''' to spend the morning as the unicorn. Then go up, shower, and come back in his horse fursuit for some of the technical categories.

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Michael Bard at 18:07, 8 March 2008

2008-03-08T18:07:28Z

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	[[Category:Xanadu]] [[Category:~~Mythological~~]]		[[Category:Xanadu]] [[Category:Mythical]]
	[[Category:Story]] {{DEFAULTSORT:Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream}}		[[Category:Story]] {{DEFAULTSORT:Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream}}
	{{title\|name=Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream\|author=Michael Bard}}		{{title\|name=Like the Unfolding Petals of a Dream\|author=Michael Bard}}

Michael Bard: Why are there two different yellows for the colour code "CC9900"??

2008-03-08T18:05:01Z

Why are there two different yellows for the colour code "CC9900"??

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