User:Hawl/Iris Budding - Revision history

Hawl at 02:16, 11 October 2013

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ShadowWolf: author had title in page not matching the page title - I copied the author initially rather than the stated intention via the page-name

2011-12-25T03:46:40Z

author had title in page not matching the page title - I copied the author initially rather than the stated intention via the page-name

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	{{title\|name=Paradise Perspectives Zero: Iris ~~In Bloom~~}}		{{title\|name=Paradise Perspectives Zero: Iris Budding}}
	{{author note\|A Prequal to the Paradise Perspectives series, featuring Iris/CV/Cale}}		{{author note\|A Prequal to the Paradise Perspectives series, featuring Iris/CV/Cale}}
	{{universe\|Paradise}}		{{universe\|Paradise}}

ShadowWolf: some fixups and the like at the authors request

2011-12-25T00:48:29Z

some fixups and the like at the authors request

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Hawl at 16:19, 24 December 2011

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	Cale's mother looked confused, she looked at her son and just saw her son, nothing unusual. The hair, the jaw, the sharpened teeth, the ears that had vanished and now		Cale's mother looked confused, she looked at her son and just saw her son, nothing unusual. The hair, the jaw, the sharpened teeth, the ears that had vanished and now

	were re-appearing in a very different shape on the top of his head. His visage had altered drastically, he turned around because the pain finally stopped "I'm a		were re-appearing in a very different shape on the top of his head. His visage had altered drastically, he turned around because the pain finally stopped "I'm a cat.... no... a tiger...", his mother responded with a very concerned tone "Cale, you're scaring me.... What are you talking about?"

	~~cat.... no... a tiger...", his mother responded with a very concerned tone "Cale, you're scaring me.... What are you talking about?"~~ Cale responded "I'm a monster, a		Cale responded "I'm a monster, a talking tiger! That's what I'm talking about!!" running his post-human paw down his now furry face.

	~~talking tiger! That's what I'm talking about!!" running his post-human paw down his now furry face.~~		Cale's mom just shook her head "I... Cale is this a game?" her son just shook his head no, even with the facial features that were only apparent to him one could tell that he was very visibly upset. "You're hallucinating, it's not real, lay back down and try to get your mind off of it. I'm taking you to the doctor."
	Cale's mom just shook her head "I... Cale is this a game?" her son just shook his head no, even with the facial features that were only apparent to him one could tell

	that he was ~~very visibly upset. "You're hallucinating~~, it's not ~~real~~, ~~lay back down~~ and ~~try~~ to ~~get your mind off~~ of ~~it. I'm taking you to the doctor~~.~~" Cale had read~~		Cale had read about hallucinations, visible and audial oddities that aren't there, just a trick of the mind. He was still a little boy, just one covered in hair, fake hair that's not even there. Cale wiped his brow as a cartoon character would after narrowly avoiding certain doom, he dropped his briefs and began to empty his bladder, he saw that under his clothing he was covered in fur while he was doing his bussiness he stopped hearing the sound of his urine splashing and felt that he was no longer holding onto anything.

	~~about hallucinations, visible and audial oddities that aren't there, just a trick of the mind. He was still a little boy, just one covered in hair, fake hair that's~~		Where his tallywhacker was seconds ago, was nothing.... no not nothing, a cavity or an opening inbetween his leg. The urine was still coming out, but it was grossly drizzly inbetween his legs. "That's not an hallucination... MOM! MOM! IT'S NOT AN HALLUCINATION!", his already high-pitched childlike voice, increased in pitch as he spoke, sounding more like a young girl's voice, than a young boy's. His mother came into the room "Cale it's not real, you're still hu... CALE WADE VINOLE! WHAT IN THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU'VE DONE TO THE FLOOR! CAN YOU NOT SEE WHERE THE TOILET IS?!?!" refering to the yellow puddle on the floor.

	~~not even there. Cale wiped his brow as a cartoon character would after narrowly avoiding certain doom, he dropped his briefs and began to empty his bladder, he saw~~

	~~that under his clothing he was covered in fur while he was doing his bussiness he stopped hearing the sound of his urine splashing and felt that he was no longer~~

	~~holding onto anything.~~ Where his tallywhacker was seconds ago, was nothing.... no not nothing, a cavity or an opening inbetween his leg. The urine was still coming

	out, but it was grossly drizzly inbetween his legs. "That's not an hallucination... MOM! MOM! IT'S NOT AN HALLUCINATION!", his already high-pitched childlike voice,

	increased in pitch as he spoke, sounding more like a young girl's voice, than a young boy's. His mother came into the room "Cale it's not real, you're still hu... CALE

	WADE VINOLE! WHAT IN THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU'VE DONE TO THE FLOOR! CAN YOU NOT SEE WHERE THE TOILET IS?!?!" refering to the yellow puddle on the floor.

	The young boy-turned-tiger-turned-tigress tried to frantically explain "I was using the bathroom and, my... it vanished, there's like this hole here... Mommy... what's		The young boy-turned-tiger-turned-tigress tried to frantically explain "I was using the bathroom and, my... it vanished, there's like this hole here... Mommy... what's

Hawl at 16:14, 24 December 2011

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	temporarily deaf. "What? I can't hear you, my ears, MY EARS!".		temporarily deaf. "What? I can't hear you, my ears, MY EARS!".




	Cale's mother looked confused, she looked at her son and just saw her son, nothing unusual. The hair, the jaw, the sharpened teeth, the ears that had vanished and now		Cale's mother looked confused, she looked at her son and just saw her son, nothing unusual. The hair, the jaw, the sharpened teeth, the ears that had vanished and now

Hawl at 16:13, 24 December 2011

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	grandmother, though she was a retired nurse so she was overprotective of everyone who was sick.		grandmother, though she was a retired nurse so she was overprotective of everyone who was sick.



	Today was Thursday August 17th, he had been out of school since only yesterday and wasn't feeling any better. Actually kind of worse, he agreed with his Grandmother		Today was Thursday August 17th, he had been out of school since only yesterday and wasn't feeling any better. Actually kind of worse, he agreed with his Grandmother
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	they must be doing something right.		they must be doing something right.

	Fate can be a little funny as Cale found out, he had been asleep with an emptied bowl at his side, unable to drop it from the top of his bunk bed. His brother


			Fate can be a little funny as Cale found out, he had been asleep with an emptied bowl at his side, unable to drop it from the top of his bunk bed. His brother

	Calvin didn't sleep in the same room as him, but he had a bunkbed anyway. No one can really be sure just why things work out as they do sometimes. Cale had a bunk bed,		Calvin didn't sleep in the same room as him, but he had a bunkbed anyway. No one can really be sure just why things work out as they do sometimes. Cale had a bunk bed,

Hawl at 08:46, 15 December 2011

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	happened to me and my doctor can't really tell me too much about it. I can't really be too sure, I'd like someone who knows about.... change? To speak to me about		happened to me and my doctor can't really tell me too much about it. I can't really be too sure, I'd like someone who knows about.... change? To speak to me about

	change. My AIM name is ~~Megacat~~ CV. I seem to be a tiger now. I'm very confused.		change. My AIM name is Megacale CV. I seem to be a tiger now. I'm very confused.
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Hawl: New Story

2011-12-15T08:06:41Z

New Story

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	{{title\|name=Paradise Perspectives Zero: Iris ~~In Bloom~~}}		{{title\|name=Paradise Perspectives Zero: Iris Budding}}
	{{author note\|A Prequal to the Paradise Perspectives series, featuring Iris/CV/Cale}}		{{author note\|A Prequal to the Paradise Perspectives series, featuring Iris/CV/Cale}}
	{{universe\|Paradise}}		{{universe\|Paradise}}