ShadowWolf: author forgot to add this to the main index - fixed

2013-01-22T01:13:05Z

author forgot to add this to the main index - fixed

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Hawl at 00:51, 22 January 2013

2013-01-22T00:51:50Z

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	Gabriel smiled “Wonderful.” If there was no turning back, he’d at least have a Panda girlfriend and try to make the best of it.		Gabriel smiled “Wonderful.” If there was no turning back, he’d at least have a Panda girlfriend and try to make the best of it.

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ShadowWolf: blargh - the universe tag is supposed to handle this

2013-01-22T00:48:49Z

blargh - the universe tag is supposed to handle this

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ShadowWolf: add a 'DEFAULTSORT'

2013-01-22T00:32:34Z

add a 'DEFAULTSORT'

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ShadowWolf: some minor edits and formatting for the author

2013-01-22T00:31:52Z

some minor edits and formatting for the author

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			{{author note\|Author’s Notes:This story is the penultimate one taking place in 2006, afterwards stories will span months instead of one day. The next will cover 2006 from August 25th to February of the next year. After that I am planning something very unique involving Tall Tales, hopefully involving one MatthiasRat, but we’re still working it out. I hope this story accomplishes its goal of breathing some life into Paradise. Though don’t hold your breath for the next one. I will be doing a quite of bit of work on Metamor Keep, Gabriel And Xhyz In Space (A Paradise Webcomic my friend is working on, still on the concept art phase. The name is admittedly very silly, but it DOES take place on Earth between the Normal Canon and the “Future” version of the setting, a non-canon bridging together), Mayan Eye - An exciting E-Book series by me and MatthiasRat that I’ll talk more about when its first volume “Cat And Mouse” is done, and an afterlife setting called the Gaia Planes! Between this and future entries in FreeRIDErs I’m going to be a very busy Tigress.
	Author’s Notes:This story is the penultimate one taking place in 2006, afterwards stories will span months instead of one day. The next will cover 2006 from August 25th to February of the next year. After that I am planning something very unique involving Tall Tales, hopefully involving one MatthiasRat, but we’re still working it out. I hope this story accomplishes its goal of breathing some life into Paradise. Though don’t hold your breath for the next one. I will be doing a quite of bit of work on Metamor Keep, Gabriel And Xhyz In Space (A Paradise Webcomic my friend is working on, still on the concept art phase. The name is admittedly very silly, but it DOES take place on Earth between the Normal Canon and the “Future” version of the setting, a non-canon bridging together), Mayan Eye - An exciting E-Book series by me and MatthiasRat that I’ll talk more about when its first volume “Cat And Mouse” is done, and an afterlife setting called the Gaia Planes! Between this and future entries in FreeRIDErs I’m going to be a very busy Tigress.
	-People may have noticed the new "Brand New Past" Section. This is intended for stories that take place in a TG-Changed's past after it has been retconned for their new sex. Of course the Changed themself has no memory of this past.		-People may have noticed the new "Brand New Past" Section. This is intended for stories that take place in a TG-Changed's past after it has been retconned for their new sex. Of course the Changed themself has no memory of this past.

	PS:Anyone whose a fan of “The Future Is Paradise” will want to see what have I planned as far as Paradise’s, well, future, And without further distractions. It is my privilege to present		PS:Anyone whose a fan of “The Future Is Paradise” will want to see what have I planned as far as Paradise’s, well, future, And without further distractions. It is my privilege to present}}


	“A Perspective Into An Albino’s Breakdown” by Hawl Tygarus Enroygall		==“A Perspective Into An Albino’s Breakdown”==
			{{byline\|author=Hawl Tygarus Enroygall\|user=Hawl}}

	It was another unusual day for Gabriel Zedimouse Locke. Of course, when you had to remind yourself that you were really a five foot tall, albino, humanoid rat, every day was a little unusual. He had been this way for a few days now, starting on the shock of realizing that his closest friend was not only a large cat from bengal but a female large cat from bengal.		It was another unusual day for Gabriel Zedimouse Locke. Of course, when you had to remind yourself that you were really a five foot tall, albino, humanoid rat, every day was a little unusual. He had been this way for a few days now, starting on the shock of realizing that his closest friend was not only a large cat from bengal but a female large cat from bengal.
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	“If you insist, your observation seems a little backwards to me, you’d think, 'Oh my god I’m a freak who isn’t even human,' would take priority over “I have breasts now!” political correctness is getting to a bit a tad unbalanced. I bet several try to take advantage of the tipped scale into the pink. In the more fur filled areas I mean.” Gabriel pondered “I suppose though that it would be considerably difficult for the opposite, a woman in a man’s world, especially with the way we just want to hand women everything because they’re chicks and can’t be assed to get it themselves, because they know they can just flash their tits and get it,” Gabe pondered “Well they are changing gender AND species, so, I’d imagine having nothing familiar to fall back on could be an issue.”		“If you insist, your observation seems a little backwards to me, you’d think, 'Oh my god I’m a freak who isn’t even human,' would take priority over “I have breasts now!” political correctness is getting to a bit a tad unbalanced. I bet several try to take advantage of the tipped scale into the pink. In the more fur filled areas I mean.” Gabriel pondered “I suppose though that it would be considerably difficult for the opposite, a woman in a man’s world, especially with the way we just want to hand women everything because they’re chicks and can’t be assed to get it themselves, because they know they can just flash their tits and get it,” Gabe pondered “Well they are changing gender AND species, so, I’d imagine having nothing familiar to fall back on could be an issue.”


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	“Hehehe well it’s not my fault they can’t keep up with Nature’s Ninja! If anything I hope the Change gets people outside more. People are just lazy, I’m not a super soldier or anything,” Dave chuckled as he continued, “Volunteer work for the Corp helped get my mind back in order, the friendships with the humans here made me feel like I was David again. A Super Powered David, but that’s actually really cool and nothing worth complaining about. I had told Alyssa in my sophomore year because I had to have SOMEONE know, and she was also on staff. Plus no one really listens to her anyway, she’s a hard worker, but not very well liked. Thus I have returned to humanity, not quite, but close enough. You mentioned being terrified of Iris when you first saw her as she really is and then being calm when she explained everything. No one explained anything to me Gabriel and I almost lost it, if Iris hadn’t met you in that bathroom could you focus on anything else for the rest of the day? If you met Iris later, you would run from her and be quite late in realizing that she was in fact your friend Cale, but by that time the image of the monster trying to kill you would be stuck in your head and your relationship with her, forever tarnished. You got lucky Gabriel and had friends who cared, that is why you are still sane.” David’s voice only got more serious. “You were both incredibly lucky, Iris was there to act as a net for your sanity and accepts herself as female even though you don’t. If that had happened to us we wouldn’t be Gabriel or Dave anymore. You know how crazy hormones can make you, you know how much our society hangs up on Gender Roles, and the LBGT do not have the best union, and you know that every year, more and more people are able to see us for who we are.”		“Hehehe well it’s not my fault they can’t keep up with Nature’s Ninja! If anything I hope the Change gets people outside more. People are just lazy, I’m not a super soldier or anything,” Dave chuckled as he continued, “Volunteer work for the Corp helped get my mind back in order, the friendships with the humans here made me feel like I was David again. A Super Powered David, but that’s actually really cool and nothing worth complaining about. I had told Alyssa in my sophomore year because I had to have SOMEONE know, and she was also on staff. Plus no one really listens to her anyway, she’s a hard worker, but not very well liked. Thus I have returned to humanity, not quite, but close enough. You mentioned being terrified of Iris when you first saw her as she really is and then being calm when she explained everything. No one explained anything to me Gabriel and I almost lost it, if Iris hadn’t met you in that bathroom could you focus on anything else for the rest of the day? If you met Iris later, you would run from her and be quite late in realizing that she was in fact your friend Cale, but by that time the image of the monster trying to kill you would be stuck in your head and your relationship with her, forever tarnished. You got lucky Gabriel and had friends who cared, that is why you are still sane.” David’s voice only got more serious. “You were both incredibly lucky, Iris was there to act as a net for your sanity and accepts herself as female even though you don’t. If that had happened to us we wouldn’t be Gabriel or Dave anymore. You know how crazy hormones can make you, you know how much our society hangs up on Gender Roles, and the LBGT do not have the best union, and you know that every year, more and more people are able to see us for who we are.”


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	Iris thought about the large levels of irony of mistaking a girl for a girl and technically being wrong. Gabriel stared at her for a second having trouble grasping that too. “You mean your veil short-circuited and made you female to him?”		Iris thought about the large levels of irony of mistaking a girl for a girl and technically being wrong. Gabriel stared at her for a second having trouble grasping that too. “You mean your veil short-circuited and made you female to him?”


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	Iris gave a chuckle in response, “I don’t think it’s going to be a problem,” and then went to check on Gabriel, surely he was out of the bathroom by now. Though when she got back to the other side of the house to fetch him, she found to her shock that indeed he was still in there and so she called to him.		Iris gave a chuckle in response, “I don’t think it’s going to be a problem,” and then went to check on Gabriel, surely he was out of the bathroom by now. Though when she got back to the other side of the house to fetch him, she found to her shock that indeed he was still in there and so she called to him.

Hawl: New Story, btw what's the code to make it appear in the Paradise Catagory?

2013-01-21T23:40:32Z

New Story, btw what's the code to make it appear in the Paradise Catagory?