User:Erastus/Just the Right Shoes for This Life - Revision history

ShadowWolf: add {{universe}}

2009-02-14T20:17:12Z

add {{universe}}

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	Just the Right Shoes for This Life		Just the Right Shoes for This Life

Erastus: Added categories for setting. Added no table of contents

2007-08-22T01:42:42Z

Added categories for setting. Added no table of contents

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	His original story is [http://tsa.transform.to/misc/walkamile.html here.]		His original story is [http://tsa.transform.to/misc/walkamile.html here.]

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	one. And you were looking so good in this last dance."		one. And you were looking so good in this last dance."

	''I was?'' thought Rusty. ''This last dance? That means it was me,		''I was?'' thought Rusty. ''This last dance? That means it was me, not the previous occupant of this body!''
	not the previous occupant of this body!''

	She straightened up and used her I'm In Charge voice. "Mister		She straightened up and used her I'm In Charge voice. "Mister
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	"Would you believe we're not on Earth?" said Posti.		"Would you believe we're not on Earth?" said Posti.

	Rusty turned and stared. "We're not? How do you know?"		Rusty turned and stared. "We're ''not''? How do you know?"

	"The star patterns are quite different. There's no Big Dipper in the		"The star patterns are quite different. There's no Big Dipper in the
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	[[Category:Story\|Just the Right Shoes for This Life]]		[[Category:Story\|Just the Right Shoes for This Life]]
	[[Category:Erastus Centaur]]		[[Category:Erastus Centaur]]
			[[Category:Walk-A-Mile]]
	{{DEFAULTSORT:Just the Right Shoes for This Life}}		{{DEFAULTSORT:Just the Right Shoes for This Life}}

Bryan: removing {{part}} templates, deprecated

2007-08-06T08:47:24Z

removing {{part}} templates, deprecated

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	by Erastus Centaur		by Erastus Centaur

	~~{{part\|name~~=Chapter 1}}		==Chapter 1==

	Great! Just Great!		Great! Just Great!
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	one foot up, untied the shoe and slipped it off.		one foot up, untied the shoe and slipped it off.

	~~{{part\|name~~=Chapter 2}}		==Chapter 2==

	He was hit with a moment of dizziness, then found himself sitting		He was hit with a moment of dizziness, then found himself sitting
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	Tony's voice faded as dizziness overtook Rusty.		Tony's voice faded as dizziness overtook Rusty.

	~~{{part\|name~~=Chapter 3}}		==Chapter 3==

	Rusty sat for a moment in the shoe shop waiting for the world to		Rusty sat for a moment in the shoe shop waiting for the world to
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	with dizziness.		with dizziness.

	~~{{part\|name~~=Chapter 4}}		==Chapter 4==

	As soon has his head stopped spinning, Rusty opened his eyes--just		As soon has his head stopped spinning, Rusty opened his eyes--just
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	when a moment later the dizziness overtook him.		when a moment later the dizziness overtook him.

	~~{{part\|name~~=Chapter 5}}		==Chapter 5==

	Once his head stopped spinning, Rusty slumped in the chair. He		Once his head stopped spinning, Rusty slumped in the chair. He

Erastus: Added chapter separators

2007-07-26T20:52:23Z

Added chapter separators

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	by Erastus Centaur		by Erastus Centaur

			{{part\|name=Chapter 1}}

	Great! Just Great!		Great! Just Great!
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	greet the new guy--must be Henderson himself--Rusty quickly pulled		greet the new guy--must be Henderson himself--Rusty quickly pulled
	one foot up, untied the shoe and slipped it off.		one foot up, untied the shoe and slipped it off.

			{{part\|name=Chapter 2}}

	He was hit with a moment of dizziness, then found himself sitting		He was hit with a moment of dizziness, then found himself sitting
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	Tony's voice faded as dizziness overtook Rusty.		Tony's voice faded as dizziness overtook Rusty.

	{{part}}		{{part\|name=Chapter 3}}

	Rusty sat for a moment in the shoe shop waiting for the world to		Rusty sat for a moment in the shoe shop waiting for the world to
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	The cop undid the laces and tugged at the heel. Rusty was overcome		The cop undid the laces and tugged at the heel. Rusty was overcome
	with dizziness.		with dizziness.

			{{part\|name=Chapter 4}}

	As soon has his head stopped spinning, Rusty opened his eyes--just		As soon has his head stopped spinning, Rusty opened his eyes--just
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	when a moment later the dizziness overtook him.		when a moment later the dizziness overtook him.

	{{part}}		{{part\|name=Chapter 5}}

	Once his head stopped spinning, Rusty slumped in the chair. He		Once his head stopped spinning, Rusty slumped in the chair. He
	didn't hurt now, but the pain had been ~~very bad~~. The memory of it		didn't hurt now, but the pain had been incredible. The memory of it
	still lingered.		still lingered.

Erastus: Added parts to get it under the 32Kb limit for an edit window

2007-07-24T17:44:46Z

Added parts to get it under the 32Kb limit for an edit window

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	Tony's voice faded as dizziness overtook Rusty.		Tony's voice faded as dizziness overtook Rusty.

			{{part}}

	Rusty sat for a moment in the shoe shop waiting for the world to		Rusty sat for a moment in the shoe shop waiting for the world to
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	under the leg and tried very hard not to show it. He was relieved		under the leg and tried very hard not to show it. He was relieved
	when a moment later the dizziness overtook him.		when a moment later the dizziness overtook him.

			{{part}}

	Once his head stopped spinning, Rusty slumped in the chair. He		Once his head stopped spinning, Rusty slumped in the chair. He
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	we pry off that horseshoe now or do you first want to walk a mile?"		we pry off that horseshoe now or do you first want to walk a mile?"

	The answer to Rusty was obvious. He winked at ~~the older female~~.		The answer to Rusty was obvious. He winked at Calla.
	[[Category:Story\|Just the Right Shoes for This Life]]		[[Category:Story\|Just the Right Shoes for This Life]]
	[[Category:Erastus Centaur]]		[[Category:Erastus Centaur]]
	{{DEFAULTSORT:Just the Right Shoes for This Life}}		{{DEFAULTSORT:Just the Right Shoes for This Life}}

Erastus: New Story

2007-07-24T02:40:49Z

New Story

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