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JonBuck at 04:21, 23 September 2007

2007-09-23T04:21:28Z

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	By [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]]		By [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]]
	[[Category:Fantasy]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Story]][[Category:Animal]][[Category:Aquatic]]~~{{WIP}}~~		[[Category:Fantasy]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Story]][[Category:Animal]][[Category:Aquatic]]
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	==Part I: Southampton==		==Part I: Southampton==

JonBuck: Finished Posting

2007-09-23T04:19:35Z

Finished Posting

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JonBuck: /* Part VI: Rebirth */

2007-09-23T00:04:35Z

Part VI: Rebirth

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	<nowiki>[[I don't know where he is...]]</nowiki> I replied. In fact, it would be one of the greatest mysteries that I would ever face. All I know is that he did not die on that ship.		<nowiki>[[I don't know where he is...]]</nowiki> I replied. In fact, it would be one of the greatest mysteries that I would ever face. All I know is that he did not die on that ship.

	<nowiki>[[That satisfactory?]]</nowiki> Orca continued. <nowiki>[[Good. As for your other two questions. I am what you might call a guardian spirit of a sort. I am here for the benefit of all whales, I just choose to look like an orca for personal reasons. I can be any whale I please.]]</nowiki> He demonstrated by instantaneously becoming a beluga, humpback, dolphin, and a couple others. <nowiki>[[I am here because my Mother, whom you would call Mother Nature, needs beings like me and my Siblings to take a more personal interest in individuals. Which is why I'm going to suffer for a long, long time until a special someone is rescued from the deep.		<nowiki>[[That satisfactory?]]</nowiki> Orca continued. <nowiki>[[Good. As for your other two questions. I am what you might call a guardian spirit of a sort. I am here for the benefit of all whales, I just choose to look like an orca for personal reasons. I can be any whale I please.]]</nowiki> He demonstrated by instantaneously becoming a beluga, humpback, dolphin, and a couple others. <nowiki>[[I am here because my Mother, whom you would call Mother Nature, needs beings like me and my Siblings to take a more personal interest in individuals. Which is why I'm going to suffer for a long, long time until a special someone is rescued from the deep.]]</nowiki>

	<nowiki>[[What gives me the right? The simple fact that I just could not let you die! I am not limitless, though. That is why some still perished. I could not make enough coins and jewelry to save everyone. The simple injustice of not having enough boats is enough. Yes, you are not human anymore. But does that really matter? Your soul is that of a whale, think a moment and you will remember all of it. The body is immaterial, Child. It's only a shell, do not place too great a value on it. When you die, your core of being will be recycled into something else. A fish perhaps, a bird, a horse, a dog, another whale. Even through this rebirth, the soul retains it's individuality, what makes it unique among the others. Even through this, I did not want to have to have you go through the pain of rebirth again. I need your memories in tact. So chin up, my Child. You are still yourself, no matter that you have flukes instead of legs.]]</nowiki> Orca took a big breath.		<nowiki>[[What gives me the right? The simple fact that I just could not let you die! I am not limitless, though. That is why some still perished. I could not make enough coins and jewelry to save everyone. The simple injustice of not having enough boats is enough. Yes, you are not human anymore. But does that really matter? Your soul is that of a whale, think a moment and you will remember all of it. The body is immaterial, Child. It's only a shell, do not place too great a value on it. When you die, your core of being will be recycled into something else. A fish perhaps, a bird, a horse, a dog, another whale. Even through this rebirth, the soul retains it's individuality, what makes it unique among the others. Even through this, I did not want to have to have you go through the pain of rebirth again. I need your memories in tact. So chin up, my Child. You are still yourself, no matter that you have flukes instead of legs.]]</nowiki> Orca took a big breath.

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2007-09-22T23:57:22Z

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JonBuck at 23:18, 22 September 2007

2007-09-22T23:18:43Z

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2007-09-09T04:03:07Z

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	By [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]]		By [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]]
	[[Category:Fantasy]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Story]][[Category:Animal]]{{WIP}}		[[Category:Fantasy]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Story]][[Category:Animal]][[Category:Aquatic]]{{WIP}}
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JonBuck: Part 4.

2007-09-08T01:13:56Z

Part 4.

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JonBuck: /* Part III: Unsinkable */

2007-09-03T00:40:42Z

Part III: Unsinkable

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	"Shut up! Shut up! I am busy! I am working Cape Race!"		"Shut up! Shut up! I am busy! I am working Cape Race!"
	"''Titanic'', 11:00 pm, Apr 14 1912		:''Titanic'', 11:00 pm, Apr 14 1912

	Apr. 14, 1912. 11:39 p.m.		Apr. 14, 1912. 11:39 p.m.

JonBuck: Next section.

2007-09-03T00:39:59Z

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JonBuck: Table of contents.

2007-09-02T07:03:08Z

Table of contents.

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	==Part I: Southampton==		==Part I: Southampton==