Talk:The Tower in the Torch - Revision history

Lloyd Brunnel: /* Heads Up */ new section

2009-09-03T23:31:37Z

Heads Up: new section

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	::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
	::::Well... no, not really... just got a small idea out of this. I guess I need to think through what I actually want to happen in this first XD --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 18:49, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::::Well... no, not really... just got a small idea out of this. I guess I need to think through what I actually want to happen in this first XD --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 18:49, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

			== Heads Up ==

			Although not technically "on hiatus", progress on this story will either be slow or non existent since my friend's birthday is coming up and I want to write a story for him. In the meantime, if anyone has any comments about how they feel the story is progressing, I would love to hear them. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 23:31, 3 September 2009 (UTC)

Lloyd Brunnel: never mind...

2009-08-30T18:49:25Z

never mind...

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	:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
	::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
			::::Well... no, not really... just got a small idea out of this. I guess I need to think through what I actually want to happen in this first XD --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 18:49, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Lloyd Brunnel: Thank you mysterious stranger!

2009-08-30T16:56:24Z

Thank you mysterious stranger!

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	::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
	:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
			::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

24.17.111.80: /* Stumped Again =( */ Another possibility

2009-08-30T16:43:53Z

Stumped Again =(: Another possibility

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	: Hmm. Maybe she starts decorating with gingerbread cookies or small flower bouquets; that seems like it would be appropriate for the circumstances -- visually festive as well as providing an interesting aroma. And it seems like Jonas would be the only one able to position them to cover the house without the odor being overwhelming in any one spot. If you don't like that particular idea, try thinking along those same lines; how would you decorate ''differently'' if someone in your family was suddenly much more interested in odor and less interested in sight? [[User:Phaedrus\|Phaedrus]] 16:05, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		: Hmm. Maybe she starts decorating with gingerbread cookies or small flower bouquets; that seems like it would be appropriate for the circumstances -- visually festive as well as providing an interesting aroma. And it seems like Jonas would be the only one able to position them to cover the house without the odor being overwhelming in any one spot. If you don't like that particular idea, try thinking along those same lines; how would you decorate ''differently'' if someone in your family was suddenly much more interested in odor and less interested in sight? [[User:Phaedrus\|Phaedrus]] 16:05, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
	::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
			:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Lloyd Brunnel: Clarification and specification

2009-08-30T16:25:28Z

Clarification and specification

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	: Hmm. Maybe she starts decorating with gingerbread cookies or small flower bouquets; that seems like it would be appropriate for the circumstances -- visually festive as well as providing an interesting aroma. And it seems like Jonas would be the only one able to position them to cover the house without the odor being overwhelming in any one spot. If you don't like that particular idea, try thinking along those same lines; how would you decorate ''differently'' if someone in your family was suddenly much more interested in odor and less interested in sight? [[User:Phaedrus\|Phaedrus]] 16:05, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		: Hmm. Maybe she starts decorating with gingerbread cookies or small flower bouquets; that seems like it would be appropriate for the circumstances -- visually festive as well as providing an interesting aroma. And it seems like Jonas would be the only one able to position them to cover the house without the odor being overwhelming in any one spot. If you don't like that particular idea, try thinking along those same lines; how would you decorate ''differently'' if someone in your family was suddenly much more interested in odor and less interested in sight? [[User:Phaedrus\|Phaedrus]] 16:05, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
			::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Phaedrus: /* Stumped Again =( */ A possible idea

2009-08-30T16:05:08Z

Stumped Again =(: A possible idea

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	Blarg! Writer's block attacks again! I know I want Sam's role in this story to be based around powering through and right now I want her to be making Jonas do something but I can't figure out what. My current idea is that she makes him help her decorate the rest of the house but ironically I can't think of how he'd do that given his physical limitations. Anyone have a suggestion? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 14:41, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		Blarg! Writer's block attacks again! I know I want Sam's role in this story to be based around powering through and right now I want her to be making Jonas do something but I can't figure out what. My current idea is that she makes him help her decorate the rest of the house but ironically I can't think of how he'd do that given his physical limitations. Anyone have a suggestion? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 14:41, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

			: Hmm. Maybe she starts decorating with gingerbread cookies or small flower bouquets; that seems like it would be appropriate for the circumstances -- visually festive as well as providing an interesting aroma. And it seems like Jonas would be the only one able to position them to cover the house without the odor being overwhelming in any one spot. If you don't like that particular idea, try thinking along those same lines; how would you decorate ''differently'' if someone in your family was suddenly much more interested in odor and less interested in sight? [[User:Phaedrus\|Phaedrus]] 16:05, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Lloyd Brunnel: /* Stumped Again =( */ new section

2009-08-30T14:41:50Z

Stumped Again =(: new section

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	{{Green\|I've never known how to write out animal noises, other than describing what they may sound like. Onomatopoeia are hard like that...}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 18:16, 26 August 2009 (UTC)		{{Green\|I've never known how to write out animal noises, other than describing what they may sound like. Onomatopoeia are hard like that...}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 18:16, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

			== Stumped Again =( ==

			Blarg! Writer's block attacks again! I know I want Sam's role in this story to be based around powering through and right now I want her to be making Jonas do something but I can't figure out what. My current idea is that she makes him help her decorate the rest of the house but ironically I can't think of how he'd do that given his physical limitations. Anyone have a suggestion? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 14:41, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Concerned Reader: /* How to vocalize */ I'm no help at all.

2009-08-26T18:16:48Z

How to vocalize: I'm no help at all.

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	The next part of this story has Jonas trying to talk, but I'm not sure how to write it out. Foxes don't make the same types of sounds as other canines/candids so I can't just do things like "rawr" and whatnot. I've been looking over http://www.foxforest.org/upclose/voicescarry.shtml since this page has recordings of fox voices but I'm still stumped. Any suggestions? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 17:39, 26 August 2009 (UTC)		The next part of this story has Jonas trying to talk, but I'm not sure how to write it out. Foxes don't make the same types of sounds as other canines/candids so I can't just do things like "rawr" and whatnot. I've been looking over http://www.foxforest.org/upclose/voicescarry.shtml since this page has recordings of fox voices but I'm still stumped. Any suggestions? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 17:39, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

			{{Green\|I've never known how to write out animal noises, other than describing what they may sound like. Onomatopoeia are hard like that...}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 18:16, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Lloyd Brunnel: /* How to vocalize */ new section

2009-08-26T17:39:54Z

How to vocalize: new section

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	Oh yeah! Great intro for Jonas, I can't wait for the next part! :) —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 08:00, 26 August 2009 (UTC)		Oh yeah! Great intro for Jonas, I can't wait for the next part! :) —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 08:00, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

			== How to vocalize ==

			The next part of this story has Jonas trying to talk, but I'm not sure how to write it out. Foxes don't make the same types of sounds as other canines/candids so I can't just do things like "rawr" and whatnot. I've been looking over http://www.foxforest.org/upclose/voicescarry.shtml since this page has recordings of fox voices but I'm still stumped. Any suggestions? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 17:39, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

WolfyDrake95 at 08:00, 26 August 2009

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	{{Green\|I agree with everything said above. This is looking to be a great introduction for Jonas.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 23:15, 25 August 2009 (UTC)		{{Green\|I agree with everything said above. This is looking to be a great introduction for Jonas.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 23:15, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

			Oh yeah! Great intro for Jonas, I can't wait for the next part! :) —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 08:00, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

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	:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
	::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
			::::Well... no, not really... just got a small idea out of this. I guess I need to think through what I actually want to happen in this first XD --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 18:49, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

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	::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
	:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
			::::You've just given me a brainwave, thank you very much. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:56, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

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	: Hmm. Maybe she starts decorating with gingerbread cookies or small flower bouquets; that seems like it would be appropriate for the circumstances -- visually festive as well as providing an interesting aroma. And it seems like Jonas would be the only one able to position them to cover the house without the odor being overwhelming in any one spot. If you don't like that particular idea, try thinking along those same lines; how would you decorate ''differently'' if someone in your family was suddenly much more interested in odor and less interested in sight? [[User:Phaedrus\|Phaedrus]] 16:05, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		: Hmm. Maybe she starts decorating with gingerbread cookies or small flower bouquets; that seems like it would be appropriate for the circumstances -- visually festive as well as providing an interesting aroma. And it seems like Jonas would be the only one able to position them to cover the house without the odor being overwhelming in any one spot. If you don't like that particular idea, try thinking along those same lines; how would you decorate ''differently'' if someone in your family was suddenly much more interested in odor and less interested in sight? [[User:Phaedrus\|Phaedrus]] 16:05, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
	::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)		::It's not that he's more interested in odor--true it's now stronger than his sight in terms of range and degree but he'd be up close to whatever he's working on so it wouldn't be that much of an issue. The idea here is that Sam wants to keep Jonas as busy as possible, both to keep his mind occupied and to make him adapt to his body. This might be easier if I actually did any decorating around the holidays... what needs to be done other than a tree and putting tinsel on stair banisters? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd Brunnel]] 16:25, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
			:::The problem with answering that is that there's no consistency -- I don't think I've ever been in two houses that were decorated for Christmas in the same way. On the bright side, that means that you can get away with anything. But here's one option: One of my old coworkers' families didn't go with the traditional huge tree in the living room; they had small trees (maybe just 3') in ''every'' room in the house, and a larger tree (but still not as large as usual) in the living room for the presents. And every one of those trees was decorated. A fox could probably handle putting the ornaments up on at least the majority of a small tree like that. [[Special:Contributions/24.17.111.80\|24.17.111.80]] 16:43, 30 August 2009 (UTC)