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<p>Suggesting some proofreading</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>==Errores Gramaticales==<br /> It&#039;s a really nice poem, and I agree, Spanish is a beautiful language, but I couldn&#039;t help but notice some grammar mistakes in it. It was very tempting to just correct them myself, but I thought that would be rude and you wouldn&#039;t be able to learn anything if I did it. So instead I&#039;m just going to point them out here and try to explain why they are wrong.<br /> <br /> &lt;poem&gt;<br /> <br /> En la primavera,<br /> las flores dulces {{replace|floresen,|florecen,}} {{note|That&#039;s the way it is conjugated, ellas &#039;&#039;florecen&#039;&#039;}}<br /> {{replace|Y|y}} se abren y llenan {{note|You cannot start with a capital letter if the sentence hasn&#039;t ended}}<br /> el cielo con<br /> un olor,<br /> {{replace|una|un}} perfume de {{note|the article &#039;&#039;una&#039;&#039; refers to femenine nouns}}<br /> {{replace|Naturaleza|naturaleza}}, la mujer. {{note|As &#039;&#039;naturaleza&#039;&#039; is not a proper name, it doesn&#039;t go with a capital letter}}<br /> Y las abejas ofertas<br /> flotan de tallo<br /> a tallo,<br /> {{replace|Cantando|cantando}} una canción de<br /> {{replace|Su|su}} belleza.<br /> <br /> En el invierno,<br /> los rojos, y amarillos desteñirán<br /> a morrón{{add|.}}<br /> Y {{replace|la|el}} perfume {{note|&#039;&#039;la&#039;&#039; refers to femenine nouns}}<br /> morirá.<br /> Y los tallos pequeños<br /> caen<br /> en blanco,<br /> blanco {{replace|frio|frío}}. {{note|It has an accent because of super complicated rules, and it would be better if we leave it like that}}<br /> <br /> Pero {{replace|siempre yo sé|yo sé que siempre}} {{note|It&#039;s technicaly correct, but it makes more sense like this}}<br /> {{remove|Que}} los petálos {{note|This is just if you followed the correction above}}<br /> {{replace|Abrirán|se abrirán}} y desplegarán de nuevo. {{note|It&#039;s a &quot;verbo pronominal&quot; (the English language doesn&#039;t have them, but they are also very common in French), so you must include the &#039;&#039;se&#039;&#039;}}<br /> Y calentarán el mundo<br /> {{replace|Con|con}} rojos, amarillos, y blancos,<br /> {{replace|Y|y}} lucirán sus caras simples<br /> {{replace|Al|al}} sol.<br /> <br /> &lt;/poem&gt;<br /> All in all, it&#039;s very good. You could work the quinks of the language in no time with more practice.<br /> <br /> I hope to see more of these soon :) [[User:Pocsock|Pocsock]] 00:09, 28 January 2008 (EST)</div>

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