Talk:From Nowhere - Revision history

ShadowWolf at 19:23, 30 June 2008

2008-06-30T19:23:20Z

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	: What specific improvements do you think a good editor would make? If they're minor (punctuation, formatting, etc.), go ahead and edit the story page, and I'll revert any changes I disagree with. If major, post here. (This goes for all my stories.) --[[User:Trismegistus Shandy\|Trismegistus Shandy]] 14:27, 30 June 2008 (EDT)		: What specific improvements do you think a good editor would make? If they're minor (punctuation, formatting, etc.), go ahead and edit the story page, and I'll revert any changes I disagree with. If major, post here. (This goes for all my stories.) --[[User:Trismegistus Shandy\|Trismegistus Shandy]] 14:27, 30 June 2008 (EDT)

			::Actually the "editors touch" is about flow, word choice, etc... This story is excellent, but very rough - it actually reminds me of a lot of my rough drafts. Then I hand them to an editor :) -- [[User:ShadowWolf\|ShadowWolf]] 15:23, 30 June 2008 (EDT)

Trismegistus Shandy: what specifically...?

2008-06-30T18:27:18Z

what specifically...?

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	Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to [[ShadowWolfs Pack]] at 2.5 stars. [[User:ShadowWolf\|ShadowWolf]] 00:57, 10 May 2008 (EDT)		Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to [[ShadowWolfs Pack]] at 2.5 stars. [[User:ShadowWolf\|ShadowWolf]] 00:57, 10 May 2008 (EDT)

			: What specific improvements do you think a good editor would make? If they're minor (punctuation, formatting, etc.), go ahead and edit the story page, and I'll revert any changes I disagree with. If major, post here. (This goes for all my stories.) --[[User:Trismegistus Shandy\|Trismegistus Shandy]] 14:27, 30 June 2008 (EDT)

ShadowWolf: New page: Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to ShadowWolfs Pack at 2.5 stars. ~~~~

2008-05-10T04:57:40Z

New page: Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to ShadowWolfs Pack at 2.5 stars. ~~~~

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Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to [[ShadowWolfs Pack]] at 2.5 stars. [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 00:57, 10 May 2008 (EDT)