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ShadowWolf: fix the 'universe' tag

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ShadowWolf: add author category tag

2009-01-16T20:51:45Z

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Silverhit.92 at 13:56, 7 August 2008

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	Meanwhile Luna was at home reading. She just got out of the shower and put on a fresh pair of jeans and shirt. She felt better after that. Luna was still wondering what her mother was talking about this morning. She wonder what secret her mother kept. Then suddenly she felt sick again and she ran to the bathroom.		Meanwhile Luna was at home reading. She just got out of the shower and put on a fresh pair of jeans and shirt. She felt better after that. Luna was still wondering what her mother was talking about this morning. She wonder what secret her mother kept. Then suddenly she felt sick again and she ran to the bathroom.
	'''Wednesday 7/16/08 11:05 AM'''
			'''Wednesday 7/16/08 11:05 AM'''

	Luna got up. After a night of puking and headaches she felt exhausted. Luna had another strange dream. This time it was more clear. Luna was in the woods. Was it the woods near town? Luna never will know. But Luna felt strange in her dream. In the woods she felt like she was at home. She felt safe. The moon was high in the sky. She could see all around her as if it was daytime. Then something came to her. Something dark. She woke up after that. Luna was still queasy from last night. Luna decide to stay in bed instead of risking puking again. Luna still was in bed when Kate came back from shopping. Kate went to check on Luna and then back downstairs. Luna have decide that she needs a drink before dehydrates to death. Luna went downstairs to the kitchen to get a drink. Kate was on the phone talking to someone. Luna guess it was the same person she talk to yesterday. Luna was eating a piece of bread went Kate got of the phone.		Luna got up. After a night of puking and headaches she felt exhausted. Luna had another strange dream. This time it was more clear. Luna was in the woods. Was it the woods near town? Luna never will know. But Luna felt strange in her dream. In the woods she felt like she was at home. She felt safe. The moon was high in the sky. She could see all around her as if it was daytime. Then something came to her. Something dark. She woke up after that. Luna was still queasy from last night. Luna decide to stay in bed instead of risking puking again. Luna still was in bed when Kate came back from shopping. Kate went to check on Luna and then back downstairs. Luna have decide that she needs a drink before dehydrates to death. Luna went downstairs to the kitchen to get a drink. Kate was on the phone talking to someone. Luna guess it was the same person she talk to yesterday. Luna was eating a piece of bread went Kate got of the phone.
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	“He doesn’t have to tell me.” said a cold voice. “ and I been to hell and escape from it.”		“He doesn’t have to tell me.” said a cold voice. “ and I been to hell and escape from it.”

	Kate turn around and saw a man standing behind her. He was tall, taller than Kill. He had a dark cloak covering his whole body. Kate couldn’t see his face because his hood cover it. But Kate did see he had bright red eyes. The man was walking closer to her and making her fell trap. Kate couldn’t escape. Kill was on one side as this man was on the other. But Kate knew this man was a demon. She hold a bottle of holy water in her hand ready to strike at the last moment.		Kate turn around and saw a man standing behind her. He was tall, taller than Kill. He had a dark cloak covering his whole body. Kate couldn’t see his face because his hood cover it. But Kate did see he had bright red eyes. The man was walking closer to her and making her fell trap. Kate couldn’t escape. Kill was on one side as this man was on the other. But Kate knew this man was a demon. She hold a bottle of holy water in her hand ready to strike at the last moment.

	“Who are you?” Kate said		“Who are you?” Kate said
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	“No, darling.” Dalzen said. “ I want EVERY were-animal to be like that.” and then darkness went over Kate.		“No, darling.” Dalzen said. “ I want EVERY were-animal to be like that.” and then darkness went over Kate.

	'''Thursday 7/17/08 5:15 PM'''		'''Thursday 7/17/08 5:15 PM'''

	It has been 24-hours since Kate left. Lee was trying everything to get Luna back to normal but it was not working. Luna was going in and out of conscious. She was having fever dreams and hallucinations. The sickness had settle and soon Luna will wake up soon. The Shadow Elite have call them Revivers because they were able to stop demons from making were-animals evil. Lee is the only one in the world who was looking for a cure and so far Luna was still sick. Lee meet Kate along time ago when she was in France with her husband. She was being chase by a werewolf by the name of Kill. Lee was able to stop Kill and save Kate. But now Luna was sick and it was up to Lee to save her. Then Luna woke up.		It has been 24-hours since Kate left. Lee was trying everything to get Luna back to normal but it was not working. Luna was going in and out of conscious. She was having fever dreams and hallucinations. The sickness had settle and soon Luna will wake up soon. The Shadow Elite have call them Revivers because they were able to stop demons from making were-animals evil. Lee is the only one in the world who was looking for a cure and so far Luna was still sick. Lee meet Kate along time ago when she was in France with her husband. She was being chase by a werewolf by the name of Kill. Lee was able to stop Kill and save Kate. But now Luna was sick and it was up to Lee to save her. Then Luna woke up.
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	“Your mother Kate.”		“Your mother Kate.”

	'''Thursday 7/17/08 6:38 PM'''		'''Thursday 7/17/08 6:38 PM'''

	Kate was in some sort of cave. She look around and saw Kill standing over her with a silver knife. The one weakness to werewolves . Kate look around to see the cave had some human material to it. A lamp was on the end of the table across Kate. It’s light show the whole cave except for the corner near the cave entrance. The sun was setting she was sure of it. She was gone for more than a day. But how? She didn’t lose conscious and yet a whole day has gone by. Kate try to get up but she was tie to the floor. Kill was staring at her like prey. He will kill her without blinking.		Kate was in some sort of cave. She look around and saw Kill standing over her with a silver knife. The one weakness to werewolves . Kate look around to see the cave had some human material to it. A lamp was on the end of the table across Kate. It’s light show the whole cave except for the corner near the cave entrance. The sun was setting she was sure of it. She was gone for more than a day. But how? She didn’t lose conscious and yet a whole day has gone by. Kate try to get up but she was tie to the floor. Kill was staring at her like prey. He will kill her without blinking.
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	Luna was about to be a werewolf. Although it will change her into a monster who eats people at night and it will change her life. She knew that she shouldn’t look forward to being a werewolf. But tonight will change her life forever. She went downstairs to get something to eat. She open the fridge and grab an apple. She bit into the apple and walk to the living room. Her sickness was gone but Lee said it will come back before she transform for the first time. Luna look at the picture on the coffee table. One had a picture of Kate. Anger suddenly rose in Luna. Why did her mother lie to her? But before Luna could turn away from the picture something hit the front door. Luna look at the door. Someone was trying to enter the house and gun was upstairs.		Luna was about to be a werewolf. Although it will change her into a monster who eats people at night and it will change her life. She knew that she shouldn’t look forward to being a werewolf. But tonight will change her life forever. She went downstairs to get something to eat. She open the fridge and grab an apple. She bit into the apple and walk to the living room. Her sickness was gone but Lee said it will come back before she transform for the first time. Luna look at the picture on the coffee table. One had a picture of Kate. Anger suddenly rose in Luna. Why did her mother lie to her? But before Luna could turn away from the picture something hit the front door. Luna look at the door. Someone was trying to enter the house and gun was upstairs.

	'''Friday 7/18/08 3:13PM'''		'''Friday 7/18/08 3:13PM'''


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	“But the cave will be gone.” said Lee and then he threw a grenade. The grenade hit the gas barrel and then a explosion rip the cave apart. Kate was knock down and soon she fell into darkness.		“But the cave will be gone.” said Lee and then he threw a grenade. The grenade hit the gas barrel and then a explosion rip the cave apart. Kate was knock down and soon she fell into darkness.

	'''Friday 7/18/08 3:22 PM'''		'''Friday 7/18/08 3:22 PM'''

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	Luna ran as fast as she can to the woods. She knew that was the person who attack the gang member Tuesday. She jump over a bush and ran to a path down the woods. A thought was repeating in her mind. She just killed someone. She felt the sweat on her neck as she stop running and took a minute to rest. Luna look at a cut on her arm. She was bleeding and had bruises all over her body. But still she had to go on. Luna began to run again when she heard someone behind her. She knew that it was Kill. She dash down the woods. She was prey and he was predator.		Luna ran as fast as she can to the woods. She knew that was the person who attack the gang member Tuesday. She jump over a bush and ran to a path down the woods. A thought was repeating in her mind. She just killed someone. She felt the sweat on her neck as she stop running and took a minute to rest. Luna look at a cut on her arm. She was bleeding and had bruises all over her body. But still she had to go on. Luna began to run again when she heard someone behind her. She knew that it was Kill. She dash down the woods. She was prey and he was predator.

	'''Friday 7/18/08 4:45 PM'''		'''Friday 7/18/08 4:45 PM'''

	Kate felt her whole body in pain. She was on the floor of the cave, somehow she survive. For most of the time she was going in and out of conscious. The explosion had cause the cave to collapse and to break the cage. Kate was no longer chain to the floor or to a pole. Kate lift a rock that was pinning her down. Kate got up and look around to see the damage. The roof of the cave fell and a bunch of rocks and boulders were pile everywhere around her. Kate could see light coming from the entrance of the cave. She walk towards the light. Then Kate step on something metal. Kate look at down at it. It was what was left of the cage.		Kate felt her whole body in pain. She was on the floor of the cave, somehow she survive. For most of the time she was going in and out of conscious. The explosion had cause the cave to collapse and to break the cage. Kate was no longer chain to the floor or to a pole. Kate lift a rock that was pinning her down. Kate got up and look around to see the damage. The roof of the cave fell and a bunch of rocks and boulders were pile everywhere around her. Kate could see light coming from the entrance of the cave. She walk towards the light. Then Kate step on something metal. Kate look at down at it. It was what was left of the cage.

Silverhit.92 at 13:53, 7 August 2008

2008-08-07T13:53:15Z

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	“Don’t worry I will.” said Luna and Kate went back to her room to make the call.		“Don’t worry I will.” said Luna and Kate went back to her room to make the call.

	Luna lay down on her bed, trying to rest. But it was hard since she now has the headache of century. Luna got up and look around her room to see if there was a book to read. She stop at her mirror. She did look like her mother a bit. Both of them have thin faces and brown eyes. Both of them look athletic yet Kate was slightly taller than Luna. Luna’s hair was a light brown however and Kate was a dark brown, almost black. Luna look at the reflection and saw that she was a bit pale. Luna went back to her bed but before she could lay down she thought she her something. She open her door. Luna could hear her mother talking on the phone in her room. Kate was talking really fast, like what she was saying was important. Luna walk down the hall towards her mother’s room. Luna never seen her mother’s room. She heard from her mother’s friends that Kate was once an author. Luna never knew if this was true or not but she thinks that something could be hiding in there. Luna stop at the door, trying to listen to what Kate was saying. Luna wasn’t a person to eavesdrop but it sound important.		Luna lay down on her bed, trying to rest. But it was hard since she now has the headache of century. Luna got up and look around her room to see if there was a book to read. She stop at her mirror. She did look like her mother a bit. Both of them have thin faces and brown eyes. Both of them look athletic yet Kate was slightly taller than Luna. Luna’s hair was a light brown however and Kate was a dark brown, almost black. Luna look at the reflection and saw that she was a bit pale. Luna went back to her bed but before she could lay down she thought she her something. She open her door. Luna could hear her mother talking on the phone in her room. Kate was talking really fast, like what she was saying was important. Luna walk down the hall towards her mother’s room. Luna never seen her mother’s room. She heard from her mother’s friends that Kate was once an author. Luna never knew if this was true or not but she thinks that something could be hiding in there. Luna stop at the door, trying to listen to what Kate was saying. Luna wasn’t a person to eavesdrop but it sound important.

	“Look Lee I find it strange that she is sick around this time in the month.” Kate said. She pause to listen to what the person she call was saying. “Yes I’m sure.” she said. “I have it right in front of my face. It is this Friday.”		“Look Lee I find it strange that she is sick around this time in the month.” Kate said. She pause to listen to what the person she call was saying. “Yes I’m sure.” she said. “I have it right in front of my face. It is this Friday.”

Silverhit.92 at 13:36, 7 August 2008

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	“You will be mine, Luna” Dalzen said. Luna look around to see where he was at. “You can’t run from me Luna, goddess of the moon.”		“You will be mine, Luna” Dalzen said. Luna look around to see where he was at. “You can’t run from me Luna, goddess of the moon.”

	'''Saturday 7/19/08 8:25 PM'''		'''Saturday 7/19/08 8:25 PM'''

Silverhit.92 at 13:34, 7 August 2008

2008-08-07T13:34:39Z

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Silverhit.92 at 13:32, 7 August 2008

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	It was a cool night at a small town called South Willson. It was summer time and everyone was hot. It was one of the hottest summers in Wisconsin and everyone didn't like being outdoors. But no one knew it was a nice night except for one girl, Luna Malone. It was unusual for someone to be walking down ~~the~~ the town at night but Luna like the cool air at night. It was a summer night and she like walking. This was her time to enjoy the night. When it was spring fall and winter she couldn’t walk around that much. A wind blow and the sky lit up. Luna look up and saw the moon. It wasn't a full moon but it was getting there. She took a look down the street. She was at the north part of town where it was next to the woods. There was rumors that creatures live in the woods. But Luna knew it was all a myth. But still, it felt like she was being watch. Luna sigh, look at the wood and walk home.		It was a cool night at a small town called South Willson. It was summer time and everyone was hot. It was one of the hottest summers in Wisconsin and everyone didn't like being outdoors. But no one knew it was a nice night except for one girl, Luna Malone. It was unusual for someone to be walking down the town at night but Luna like the cool air at night. It was a summer night and she like walking. This was her time to enjoy the night. When it was spring, fall, and winter she couldn’t walk around that much. A wind blow and the sky lit up. Luna look up and saw the moon. It wasn't a full moon but it was getting there. She took a look down the street. She was at the north part of town where it was next to the woods. There was rumors that creatures live in the woods. But Luna knew it was all a myth. But still, it felt like she was being watch. Luna sigh, look at the wood and walk home.

			South Willson lives near a highway north of Chicago and Milwaukee. Because of this a lot of traffic goes through the town. South Willson was loud even at night. The only part that was quiet was the north part, away from the highway. This was the only area quiet enough for Luna to think. So during the night especially on summer vacation Luna goes to that part of the town. But she couldn’t stay there long because her mother didn’t like the idea of her daughter going to town in the middle of the night. Mrs. Kate Malone was one of those mothers who worry too much. She doesn’t want her daughter in any danger at all. She didn’t know how tough Luna can be. Luna was one of the toughest teenagers in South Wilson.

			Luna was walking to her house when her mother came out the front door. She had a very angry look on her face and Luna knew she was angry about her walking to town . Luna was on the porch as her mother began to yell at her and her whole speech of how worry she was when she was walks to town at night. Luna was in a foul mood when she went to bed that night. All she wants to do is scream at her mother but she knew that wouldn’t get her anywhere but trouble. Luna doesn’t know what makes her mother paranoid Was it the fact that she was married to a person who was a head of the best security company in Europe and the person disappear from the face of earth? Or something else? Luna’s father disappear when she was eight years old. Kate said that he went on a trip but Luna knew she was lying. So it was just Luna and Kate living in South Willson, getting money from the company Luna’s dad own. Luna try to go to sleep as best as she could but she felt restless. Luna look out the window, she thought she saw something. She had that feeling again, like she was being watch. Luna look away from the window and fell asleep.

			'''Tuesday 7/15/08 12:00 AM'''

			Kill was looking from a great distance at the girl. She was Kill’s prey. She will be his soon but Kill had to wait. His master knows what to do. He can hear his voice even if he was not with him. Kill went down the path to the middle of the woods. His senses can help him find where his prey is. He didn’t need his sight to know where she was. He can smell where she was at. Kill leap over a log and turn back to town. He just found her scent. She live at the south part of town. Kill went as fast as he can to where the scent was at. Then suddenly Kill stop. About ten feet ahead was the town. Kill couldn’t be seen in town. His master would be angry if Kill was seen in town, especially in his night form. But Kill could see where his prey live. She was at her window look out. She was several blocks away but Kill could see her from here with his excellent vision.

			“Wait. She will come to you”

			Kill knew it was his master’s voice. His master wants Kill to take her in, raise her to become like him. But not yet. Kill has to wait for her to come to him. Then we she does, Kill will show her what it is like to be a warrior of the night. He will show her to fear him. To fear of his werewolf form

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It was a cool night at a small town called South Willson. It was summer time and everyone was hot. It was one of the hottest summers in Wisconsin and everyone didn't like being outdoors. But no one knew it was a nice night except for one girl, Luna Malone. It was unusual for someone to be walking down the the town at night but Luna like the cool air at night. It was a summer night and she like walking. This was her time to enjoy the night. When it was spring fall and winter she couldn’t walk around that much. A wind blow and the sky lit up. Luna look up and saw the moon. It wasn't a full moon but it was getting there. She took a look down the street. She was at the north part of town where it was next to the woods. There was rumors that creatures live in the woods. But Luna knew it was all a myth. But still, it felt like she was being watch. Luna sigh, look at the wood and walk home.