https://shifti.org/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=Alex+Walorn 2026-08-19T00:27:51Z User contributions MediaWiki 1.46.0-alpha https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:Oberon&diff=3559 2007-10-20T18:37:16Z

<p>Alex Walorn: /* Paragraph Spacing */</p> <hr /> <div>Please don't use &quot;smart quotes&quot; (curly quotes) in page names. It's okay to use them in the &lt;nowiki&gt;{{title}}&lt;/nowiki&gt; template but creates problems in linking the pages in from other parts of the site. &amp;mdash; [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 15:52, 14 August 2007 (EDT)<br /> <br /> == Paragraph Spacing ==<br /> <br /> You might want to go back to the stories you recently posted and make sure the paragraphs are indicated with a blank line between them in your word processor. Your recent postings are basically single paragraphs... --[[User:JonBuck|Buck]] 16:48, 3 October 2007 (EDT)<br /> <br /> <br /> In regards to your Xanadu story. There is no way in flipping heck that a Man In Black could EVER get the flawless drop on a Jedi!!<br /> <br /> How then can I have my character get his memory back?!<br /> <br /> Why does he need to? Or rather, why did you get him a complete mental change at the start then? Also, the way the Men In Black nuralizer works in this context is that it KILLS the new personality, totally, and erases all the knowledge and skills they had. (Yes, I do dislike the MiB)<br /> <br /> <br /> ''Su'cuy'', Oberon, it's Joysweeper. You're done - and if copyediting is welcome... well, don't take this wrong. I am very blunt when I proofread. I've beta read for three people in the past, and I'm not too good at subtlety. Consider yourself warned.<br /> <br /> Oh. Wow. Well, the suggestions I have for your story are absurdly long. Four pages in Word and I'm not quite done. I'll put it on the story's discussion page when I've finished, okay? [[User:Joysweeper|Joysweeper]] 19 October 2007 (EDT)</div>

Alex Walorn https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:Oberon&diff=3365 2007-10-11T07:50:52Z

<p>Alex Walorn: </p> <hr /> <div>Please don't use &quot;smart quotes&quot; (curly quotes) in page names. It's okay to use them in the &lt;nowiki&gt;{{title}}&lt;/nowiki&gt; template but creates problems in linking the pages in from other parts of the site. &amp;mdash; [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 15:52, 14 August 2007 (EDT)<br /> <br /> == Paragraph Spacing ==<br /> <br /> You might want to go back to the stories you recently posted and make sure the paragraphs are indicated with a blank line between them in your word processor. Your recent postings are basically single paragraphs... --[[User:JonBuck|Buck]] 16:48, 3 October 2007 (EDT)<br /> <br /> <br /> In regards to your Xanadu story. There is no way in flipping heck that a Man In Black could EVER get the flawless drop on a Jedi!!</div>

Alex Walorn https://shifti.org/index.php?title=Talk:Contagious&diff=2994 2007-10-03T07:21:06Z

<p>Alex Walorn: kinda a pity there isn&#039;t more</p> <hr /> <div>== kinda a pity there isn't more ==<br /> <br /> I know this entire story was meant purely to be just a slow set up for the final punch line. But I honestly wonder about how the 'toons act after being changed in detail. And how they act around those not changed, how they act around those changed. Etc, etc. <br /> <br /> Pity I know there won't be more. But it's certainly a fun TF element not explored that much.</div>

Alex Walorn