User talk:Erastus/Just the Right Shoes for This Life
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Good story! Unusual to see so many well done human male → human male TFs with nary an age regression or transgender in sight. :) I noticed a few spots where a line break interrupted some italic formatting and one spot where there was an unclosed bracket, may I correct those? They're just minor formatting issues, nothing substantial. Bryan 01:53, 24 July 2007 (EDT)